Reviews for What She's Looking For
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
Wonderful story to make up for the crap VDO tweeted; especially during the show Trophy Wine when a fan asked if Bobby was lying when he said he loved Eames like a sister and not quoting here paraphrasing He said he was not lying and thought he was very clear about that. I believe that was live tweeting on Criminal Intent during the show referenced above. Its probably still on there. I thought it was a slap in the face to loyal CI fans and insulted Eames and was unnecessary.
HeathRowTottie chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Great fic, didn't want it to end. Would have loved to see how they related to one another whilst on the case and pretending to be married. And would have loved to see how they went about their relationship after. A lot of work I know, but as I said, I didn't want it to end...
SpyAgent001 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
Bobby, why must you always have the strangest timing ever. Really.

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Neshomeleh chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
I think she loved that he messed up, it made his love more true
dabbling chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Very well done! I love it, and I think it works very well in abbreviated form. My favorite thing is when he tells her to look right in front of her and then calls her Eames and then self-corrects. So very Bobby!
Hazmatt chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Great story! I really enjoyed it! Very sweet!
Summer chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
Great story, I loved it! That idea at the end sounds really great, are you posting it?
OuroborosSnyder chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
Squeeeeee! Love it! BTW, you're on Twitter? Either I'm an idiot and know this information and I'm just spacing, or I don't know. Hmm. I'm confusing myself. Anyway, loved the story. I can see a sequel to this. )

~Snyder~
Weathergirl chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
Hey G... You know I love anything you write! This is cute and definitely wish VDO could see it this way. I love the fact that he kept making sure he fit the bill. Looking forward to your other one-shots, multi-chapter fics, etc. :)
superfelix chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
I love tat he asked on and on until she answered to her type.

"Check."

"Huh?"

Oops! "I mean, yeah, of course. What else?"..LOL, so funny.

When Eames smiled, he smiled with her...mhm!

"Your, uh, best friend, huh?"

"Oh c'mon. Like that's news to you."...so sweet.

"He has to – love you, more than anything. And think that, you're the best." It was no more than she deserved. The question was, did she want it? From him?...love this!

"Yeah. I think we can make this work." ...jippy.
leftyred chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Yes yes yes! Thanks for soothing my B/A angst!

Your stories are truly superb.
CycloneT chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Brilliant! Wonderful! A perfectly in-character piece that dealt with the subject just *so*! *happy sigh* I really liked the way you switched between the case and what was happening, to the probing and oh-so-telling conversation in the car. It flowed very well and I'm smiling like a big 'ol idiot right now. Thanks for a great read. :)
rindy713 chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
yeah, i like this. a LOT! bobby is so cute as he tries to figure out if he might be alex's type and then fumbles around trying to express himself. but i think in this situation, it works a whole lot better than the suave approach. she appreciates his honesty and sincerity. i would love to read more - before and after this scene.
cifan chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Great one shot. Re: a/n2: YES. You write it, I'll read it!
iheartci chapter 1 . 5/25/2011
Aw, I really liked this! I like how you incorporated the case with it, too. Good job!
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