| Reviews for Definitely Destiny |
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Guest chapter 45 . 4/9/2018 This would probably be a long review since it will summarize my feelings for the story. So Estella and Ed's relationship never clicked for me. It was cute with all the banter and pranks, the hate-love relationship. But there was something lacking. But i waited because maybe I'll like them together in the future chapters and then Adeline came. What I really liked about Adeline's character is how strong she is but not in a loud way. I really liked how their relationship played out. It wasn't loud or the typical grand romance. There was this "homey" feeling about their love. Estella might be Edmund's great love but Adeline is Edmund's home. I hope this makes sense. So i guess you already know what team i was rooting for. As much as I love Edmund (fave character ever), I hated how he went with things and I can say you really did a good job conveying Ed's confusion. And it takes a lot to get me be annoyed at Edmund. This is my fave story of yours. Maybe because it was the most human out of all stories. Real emotions for real people. |
SAVI D chapter 45 . 6/23/2017 Please write more chapters |
optymalna chapter 8 . 11/15/2016 Tears involuntarily flowed down my cheeks at the end |
Areej chapter 46 . 7/16/2016 LOVED IT! EVERY BIT OF IT! YOU ARE AMAAAZZINNGG! AND ISABEL IS MY FAVORITE TOO! |
Anonymous chapter 6 . 3/29/2015 My favorite character is Griffy.. |
Teeahni chapter 45 . 9/4/2014 Gaaahhhh so good!'n so angsty at some parts but I'm so pleased with how you've tied up the loose ends :) and thanks for all your commentary at the end of this chappie! It wa really cool to see your thought process behind the story. Man, so intricate! |
Clara Licht chapter 46 . 7/21/2014 Dearest Ennarre, I have to say that Fate or Destiny AND Definitely Destiny really amazed me! Usually, I am really not interested in Edmund's love story, and I really love Peter's. But this story, however, is a really amazing one and I love how you picture Edmund here! And then Isabel and Peter's relationship. They are my most favorite couple ever! In all Narnia fictions I've read, Isabel is my most favorite OC ever! (with Elsa from fic Together Forever coming next. I suggest you read it! It's interesting! You can find it in my fav list along with yours!) They are just meant to be, as you say it. Honestly, this is the 2nd Narnia fic i've ever reviewed. First one is Order of Lioness, because the author... Flattered me..? No, that's not the right word. But whatever. So this is the only one I reviewed because I really want to! :D You did an excellent job here. And also on the prequel. I'm off to read the third one now. Sorry for grammar mistakes, English is not my first language. |
Elly Jade chapter 15 . 12/15/2013 Addie |
Elly Jade chapter 14 . 12/15/2013 ED IS STUPID |
Elly Jade chapter 13 . 12/15/2013 SAD FACE ( Great Chapter though |
moniquebowman chapter 44 . 10/3/2013 ok I just have to review to tell you this...I don't know if you'll ever read it but I hope you do! THIS IS MY FAV STORY ON THE WHOLE OF FANFIC like literally and I reckon it should be a trilogy of actual books that I could buy because I would and i'm sure lots of people would you are an amazing writer and I just hope that you continue with desires and destiny stumbling onto your story was such a good thing to happen :) i love how you write Edmund! he's like my favourite character since i just imagine him as being incredibly handsome and i just want ot marry him! he's hilarious and when i started reading i wanted him and Estella to get together sooo badly. i mean the pranks they played were soo hilarious and how he called her 'Stella melted my heart, and then when she married Alfred i was like noooooo! and then Adeline was there and i was like go away and let Edmund marry Estella and then when Alfred was abusive i was like YES they can finally get married (except for the baby part) anyway but i found that as i kept on reading i started to actually like Adeline and her nickname Addy was cute and then i started wanting them to get together and Edmund's feelings were just so interesting to read about and intense and then when Estella killed herself it was sooo beautifully written and when Alfred killed Alys i almost killed him for being so evil but Edmund and Adeline were cute and their daughter Estella with the nickname 'Stella and how she gets angry at Edmund for calling him 'Stella is just written sooo well now moving on haha Chad i actually hated him when he was first introduced. i was like go away you annoying rude person but then i actually started to like him and in desires and destiny i want him and Alliana to be happy although i feel sorry for poor Lucy :( Your characters are so well developed and they're all very different with interesting back stories that aren't predictable so it's interesting to read You make me laugh sooo much! Edmund being the giggling ghost OMG HILARIOUS! i noticed that you write a lot of kidnapping in your stories but at least your story has a happy ending unlike other Narnia fanfics that I've read which involve everyones lives being ruined and Edmund losing his love (not that they're bad they just leave you depressed despite being well written) anyway i find myself rereading this fanfic quite a bit because i love it :) please keep writing and i hope you get to read this review since you get so many :) xx |
moniquebowman chapter 7 . 9/15/2013 Noooo poor Edmund :( marry me! Haha lol |
moniquebowman chapter 6 . 9/15/2013 Had to write to say that I love Edmunds deep side and his POW of the white witch situation :) |
Mirie Hana chapter 45 . 5/18/2013 I've read this story over and over and over again! I never get bored of it! I've read Fate or Destiny and Desires and Destiny, but I found this story the best one I like! It's just too good to be true! I cried and laugh and feel everything the characters have been through... I'm just speechless. I love that Edmund ended up with Adeline because (no offense for those who like Estella) they were just made to be! I feel very sorry that Adeline had to go through all of that broken moments and I kinda hate Edmund for being in love with two people when the perfect person for him was Adeline! Frankly speaking, I HATE HATE HATE HATE TRULY HATE Estella. When she said that she loved her crazy husband of her than she should not bother Edmund and Adeline's relationship. Not to mention even begin to fall for Edmund when he's with Adeline! She's so selfish and naive in my opinion. Though, I have to thank her for that, because that way Edmund and Adeline were together in the end Sorry all Estella lover. I can't help but say that :p Peace! |
CheerLoveDance chapter 41 . 2/10/2013 This chapter made me cry soooo hard! I'm a big Edmund/OC fanfic person, but I've heard Fate or Destiny is good, too, so I'm going to read it next. This is the THIRD time I've read Definitely Destiny, and I cry and laugh at all the parts I used to every time. I am seriously addicted to this story; it's the best, most emotional, most romantic, most action-packed, an the most suspenseful story I've EVER read. And when I say that I don't just mean fanfiction, I mean every story, book, fanfiction, etc. When I read this it's better than a movie bc it all plays out in my head perfectly without all the lame actors. I could gush for much, much longer but I think I'll stop now by simply stating one word about this story: Amazing. |