Please continue the story! It's interesting!

What a hateful family of vipers!

So are you going to finish this? I just found it and have been enjoying it thoroughly. I loved that he actually got rid of Lady C. You've made Darcy more proactive instead of an observer well done. Thx.

You will be missed! Hopefully your muse is just resting and you will return to finish what is left. Thank you.

Great chapter.

I loved the chapter.

Hi. I have been enjoying reading this and whilst it has not been updated in a while I would love to see where this goes. Many thanks

It's a shame this was never finished!

Oh no! It's been 2 years since the last update! I hope you haven't abandoned this lovely story. You've done so well so far (even though you killed off Col. Fitzwilliam). I would love to read more. What can we do to stir up your muse?!

Please continue I'm hooked!

Did you have to kill amiable Col Fitzwilliam :(

I hope you haven't given up on this story, it's a wonderful read. It would really be a shame if you let it trail off here because I am really looking forward to their courtship and see how it all plays out. Will you please consider posting another chapter soon? There has been so much angst in this story and I feel like it's high time that you give us some happiness and fluff. Elizabeth and Darcy are so sweet together in this story and I want to see more of that, and I want to see how their happiness affects everyone else around them, including the bitter people like Lady Amie or Lady Catherine or the people of the ton. I hope that you will give us a bit of that happiness and the curiosity of the ton when they go to the theater to see Macbeth, so PLEASE post again soon. Thanks for writing!

the correct expressions are:

nevertheless not "nether the less"
bears not "bares a grudge"

run-on sentences (for example):

"I will talk with his sister and keep her entertained all you must do is entertaining Mr Darcy" is better phrased as "I will talk with his sister and keep her entertained while you engage Mr. Darcy"

"goose bumps travelling along her neck AS she stared back"

use the power of comma & period - good story but you need to trust your betas!

More please, I love it, you have done an amazing job of reworking the story and fitting in those unforgettable components of the original. Can't wait to read the rest.

yay an update! what a great chapter! well worth the wait! I am glad Darcy put Anne in her place at the end, I cant wait for Amie to be found out as well! Great job!