This was so cute, it is a total and complete shame that you haven't wrote anymore great stories for this couple in such a long time, sadly this pairing has lost a lot of attention the last few years, there are still some writer's still going strong and there have even been a few new ones that have been writing really awesome stories for this couple but it's only a handful and that's not many, considering how many there used to be.

Anyways as I said this was really adorable and would absolutely love to read more about his insanely cute couple and hopefully one day soon you will continue writing for this anime again, but until then, Adios.

I hope you consider making a sequel showing her 'punishment' and their play lol

No offense but you made this Sesshomaru about as boring as Byakuya and as emotionless as Ulquiorra.

She got attached after one day?

So cute and lovely!

Love it!

There: a noun, meaning a place. “Hey, look over there!”
Their: plural possessive. “Their eyes met.”
They’re: conjunction of they and are. “They’re getting married soon?”

Too: also, in addition, extra. A way to remember is that “too has too many extra o’s” or something similar.

Accept: an action/verb, starts with ‘A’. “He went to accept the award.”
Except: without, not including. “I have packed everything except my sneakers.”

Hope that helps! 3 Thanks for all your hard work in publishing this story and good luck with your future endeavors.

It needs to be “probably”. The “probley” that you are using isn’t actually a word.

This was awesome. the love scene was so romantic. You have a talent for this sort of thing.

Kawaiiii! I am loving this !

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Really enjoyed this story, thanks for the good reading.

I know that this is awful... but I was hoping for a inuyasha and kagome bashing so that they could keep the pup... I prefer eiji over aiko...

love it

Haha! At least rin knows how to produce more children! Thanks for posting!