Cool work.

Estoy totalmente de acuerdo contigo, el HiruMamo es canno... lalalala

O_O;; Oh my. That ending! ...why is he using oxygen for a broken arm?

Mamori's worrying is sweet, but I can't help but pity her a bit. Hiruma is sweeter than he lets on. :P But surely he shouldn't be too mad! ...wonder how much of that he actually heard...

Very cute ficlet! Thanks for sharing your work! :)

This is the first time I love Hiruma fanfic :3 Hirumaaa /

Little points: Mamori might be a tad ooc...she will never say or think about any child as a "stupid child" and she seemed annoyed at the rest of the team for their "incessant badgering." She also addresses Musashi as "Musashi-kun." They are batch mates after all.

I still like this fic. Adding this to my favorites.

That was a really sweet and interest story. Hope to see more of the same in later works.

I rather liked that a lot. I love in character romance the most. I tend to keep coming across dull Mamori's and Hiruma's that don't understand every little thing a person does and it quite upsets the balance of their relationship. This was excellently done and I look forward to even the potential of an epilogue.

I love this! I really hope you add an epilogue. I love "the burly construction worker turned five-year-old girl" part XD
And when Hiruma wakes up and the first words out of his mouth are: "The fuck are you doing now?" That was priceless.
Great job with this and marvelous writing! It seriously didn't feel long at all when I read it.

Burly construction worker turned five-year-old girl. Haha, that makes me giggle every time.

Aw! Cute! And surprisingly IC.

Aww that was cute! Nice job! :D

Chapter 2?

Onegai shimasu!

Such a sweet story :D I loved it!

May your conscience rest in peace.. loved that line! With Hiruma, it's probably for eternity... LOL

Nice fic! Hiruma x Mamori is OTP. XD

brilliant one of a kind its a great story