Loved it

AMAZING!

I just have to say that this is one of my favorite thorki mpreg fics. I was completely enthralled reading this story!

This story is amazing! I'm so glad I found it. It's like a mythological tale in and of itself.

First off, I adore this story. You are absolutely brilliant.

Now, I am highly confused. Is the story complete or isn't it, because it does not say that it is.

What a brilliant story! I stayed up way too late last night to finish it.

Loki is such a trickster all the way to the end, leaving both Thor, all of Asgard and me guessing, I loved it. You portray him being very smart and scheming extremely well, such an impressive, convoluted plan!

oh my gosh, this is amazing. How did you do that? How did you even do that? There's so many prickly little bits that have to be dealt with when you write this pairing and I've nearly gotten used to the idea that you can't have an honest-to-goodness happy ending, AND THEN YOU WENT AND WROTE ONE.

I love this so much. I love everything about this. The mythology, the mysterious plot, Loki's obscure motives, the big speech, the apple orchard, Frigga- basically, I just.

LOVE.

EVERYTHING.

"No no, I don't think I can be your brother."

What is this wondrous thing.

so many lulz and adorableness :D

followed this from the kink meme. Truly brilliant-dark and twisty and yet still somehow sweet and makes me want to delve back into Norse mythology. I adore your Loki here and Thor and there casually destructive ways and well everyone. Just really terrific.

Oh, sweet Jesus. I loved every moment. Loki is deliciously wicked!

THANK YOU, for posting this here. I love the whole idea of the prompt fills but damn it's hard to follow and read sometimes.

"You shall have no more children," said Thor, worrying the soft part where thumb met index finger. "Is that understood? And you shall adopt a life of piety and repentance, and…"

"Of course I shall," Loki soothed, and thrust forward again. "I promise."

So says Loki the Liesmith. Hah, can I have a sequel, please?

Gawd, you kill me. This was absolutely hilarious and ingenious.

the last time i was on i was fourteen years old so i had a bit of difficulty navigating the site. i'd already left a comment on lj but i thought i'd swing by and tell you how perfect this story is. and when reviewing fic i always throw that word around carelessly but for the first time i think i actually truly mean it.

thank you for writing this fic and for handling the prompt, the characters and myth with utmost care. thank you for sharing it to the world at large.