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The men upstairs and downstairs got tired of me milling about and decided to restart my life Little do you know that I had to go through an entire 18 years of existence over again EXACTLY the same way as I had the first time, only when I re-read your fic, I was horribly forced to keep the laughter to a minimum. It was torture trying not to cause my appendix to burst again, but it was worth it in order to finish this amusing fic. A satisfying ending, I might say. And it feels good to have my own body again. I'm glad to have made the journey through yur story, M'dear! 3

Poor Leo. Oh swell that ends swell I suppose. Neutering, of course, would be out of the question. Far too painful. And depressing. As a side note, I have found a way to type using subliminal messages. I just send them to a proper victim and BAM! Review time! :D I'm glad I have experimented with this in order to let you know how awesomely hilarious this piece is. Oh wait... Someone is whispering to me impatiently, I will let you know what they are saying after I read the next chapter!

It is becoming increasingly difficult to type as I become more and more intangible. My fingers keep sliping through the keyboard! ARRRGH! Anywho, Athena is awesome as Donatello I on to something incredibly bright (as always). The man down under got tired of waiting on me, so now I'm stuck on Earth. Oh well, at least I get to read this crack! :D

Ahahaha! That was hilarious and disturbing! I love it, well sort of, being a spirit is difficult. I'm sure Benjamin could attest to that. Anyways, the Man upstairs is closing the gates, and the one downstairs is opening... I'll let you know what happens after I'm done cracking up at the next chapter! :D

After long talk with anther spirit that had died from laughter after reading your crack, I have determined that it is not possible to die a second death from laughter. But it is equally as painful to laugh so hard you start to cry n the after life as it is in the physical realm. Oh well, onwards to the next chapter! (I'm also a little scarred thinking about what Don and Karai may be doing *adds to notebook of observations*)

Hell again, this review has indeed been written from beyond the grave. You keeled me over with the hilarity, originality and... babies, that are strewn throughout this fic. Please, if you value others lives... oh never mind, continue writing more crack fics, they are of great amusement to me! This chapter... The cat suit... Don's plan... Was exceptionally funny. Oops! Sorry, heaven is getting impatient and is waiting for me to enter its gates, but I have told them that I have unfinished business with your fanatic fiction. Hopefully they will keep those pearly gates open a bit longer while I test my new hypothesis; That it is possible to die again from laughter. We shall see, in the next chapter!

Mmmmkay. Based on recent observations, and the pain in my appendix, the organ has ruptured and blood as well as poison is now consuming my body. There is blood coming for my navel, but no matter! I shall find a way to finish this humorous work of fanatic fiction, even if it means doing so from beyond the grave! I will inform you of my status in the next chapter that I hope is filled with just as much hilarity as this one is!

Okay, after busting my gut a bit more, I have located the source of the greatest pain to be in my appendix. Further observations will be needed in order to conclude my hypothesis previously stated. Onwards to chapter three!

Oh my gosh... AHAHAHAHA! Its only chapter one and I'm in tears! I'm very apprehensive about reading the rest of this story, my guts may fall out if I laugh any harder. I do not know if this hypothesis is correct. I will contact you... IN THE NEXT CHAPTER! XD

Well thank goodness that it all works out fine. I'm sure Bishop will be most pleased, as well as the Shredder and Karai, and of course Splinter and the TMNT.

...All I really got out of this chapter was that Leo and Karai are gaming buddies and that Leo's going slightly insane. But it's still hilarious in its own way. Or maybe I'm just over-tired. Either way, this is pretty damn good so far (and accurate about the amount of miracle turtle-human babies popping up all over ...).

Oh jeez. This is going to turn out either ridiculously hilarious or horribly wrong. Either way, it'll somehow end with a win for the Turtles.

Poor Karai is denied once again of her maternal instincts. She should just go to the Turtles' Lair and hang out with all the women with crazy mutant babies.

Awesome ending, VH. I loved how they made him wear a chastity belt. Good job on this little story. You are awesome at this crack stuff.

The Bubbly One,
Shell