hello, me again.
Once again, why not have L, come to Ouran to visit his sister during the host club. He personally meets Kyoya, and attends their next club activity. L, can also eat sweets with Honey.

Wow. This story is amazing. I absolutely love it. Hm. Maybe during the Yotsuba arc, you could have Kyoya's father be killed by Kira, because the Ootori company has a lot of influence. I don't know. I'm just trying to help. :)

very good story. My idea if you want maybe L actually goes to Ouran to check on Kai. Or maybe a party where things go wrong and Kai's identity is revealed.

Good look with writing~! .

Awwww~!

xD That last bit... That point in time when you investigate your sisters friends... Great job on this story .

I think it's really good I need more kyouyaxkai keep up the good work

I think the story until now is very good and I love to read it.

Perhaps you could do some development between Kai and Light? Then you could make it so that she has to choose between believing Light or her brother? I don't know ouo

Perhaps you can consider the question of what to do with the host club members and how they all tie into this. What if they found out about Kira because the Ootori secret police wanted to give catching him a try and they ended up losing some men in the process? Then Kyoya could somehow bring it up in a conversation at school and mention that the Ootori family could be a target ultimately worrying Kai and causing her to let them in on her secret. What if the host club members and Kai got in too deep without L's knowledge and found out the truth? How would they stop Kira from killing them and could Kyoya become a double agent working with Light but really for the police force? Better yet, what if Kyoya became the third Kira instead of Yotsuba? How would that turn out? There are endless possibilities and never feel guilty for having a writer's block. Sometimes great ideas for great creations simply cannot be rushed. Just take a moment to think and breathe and don't get too worked up about it. From one College student from another, don't think you don't have time because here in our beginning second stages of our lives, we have much to use.

Girl, college is an excuse.
I'm on the same boat as u. College is. ...GAHHHHH! I never felt closer to death x.x

Anyway, I like this story! It's unique as in, L sister xD I love those sister stories :D

Hmmm maybe include protective brother moments?
The club finding out about the love between. Them xD

Niiice story, but I think you failed your resolution.

You're shitty at New Year's resolutions.

I love this so much. I'll be honest I was avoiding this because of the whole OC thing, but like, man I love this.

Sometimes, the grammar is off. Sometimes, certain aspects make no sense. And sometimes, the story drifts too outlandish.
And yet, I'm still reading, so its still working. Keep it up!