OH! this is a very promising beginning! I see your going a route I hardly see anymore and I love this for bringing new ideas to the tables. I am very curious about this dark angel and we really do need more magical stories around here!

I feel bad for Ami, lately all I seem to read for her is some kind of tragedy in one way or another. I can't wait to see the story progress, with hopefully better times in the future! I love the dynamic drama of the beginning, so update soon!

I haven't been on lately because I smashed my cheating exs laptop. He's a douche, and on my birthday no less! UGH! sadly though now I am without a computer and have to use the libraries in my spare time.

I promise to review when I am able to reach a computer though!

Wow, I normally don't like this pairing, but you're making it work so far! I hope for an update soon!

You don't know how excited I was to get a notification for this! I had just read it over again a few weeks ago and was hoping you'd return to it! Of course I thought I left a review then but it must've slipped my mind :

Anyhow, what a great revision! I loved this story already before but now the improvements in your writing are just icing to the cake :) I was so sad to learn that Quatre had died and it was sort of bittersweet. Sweet because he finally got to meet Ami and confirm that she wasn't just a hallucination and bitter because he left his fellow pilots to mourn in his passing.

I was especially heartbroken when it came to Trowa's reaction. :( The boys must be feeling a lot of pressure now since one of their highly esteemed comrades is amiss and I'm sure Duo's guilt will be torture for him. I truly feel bad for each of them.

Another thing about this chapter that I enjoyed was the action. Ami and Quatre sure have their work cut out for them what with the dark angel's henchmen on their tail. I am extremely curious to see how and if Quatre will find out about Ami's history and where her mysterious powers stem from. I also applaud Ami's heroism and how she was willing to throw away her divinity as an angel for Quatre's sake. She is certainly a noble character and though the dark angel may have been justified in wanting Quatre, I definitely doubt that Ami would react differently especially after it seems that she feels responsible for him being as she is/was his guardian angel.

Plus, I wonder how long it'll be before Quatre reconnects with his fellow pilots...

Anyhow, I am extremely stoked to read more! Thank you so much for revisiting this story and I will be eagerly awaiting more! Great work so far!

Whoa, well done, dear!

First, you do wonderfully with detail and grammar! I have noticed that your writing seems improved, jsut as any good writer's will. ;)

It looks like you combined some of the previous chapters to give us this and it works well, creating enough to give the reader something to nibble and you stopped at a wonderful place to keep the readers coming.

I know I will.

Quatre's questions are thought out and probably what anyone else will be asking. I do wonder if you will have the other scouts come into play in this? Still alive? Dead? Angels? Demons? Ghosts? If not, that's alright as the pilots reaction to their dead comrade coming back from the dead will be enough of a dramatic shocker that you'll have no trouble biting into. ;)

Thank you, thank you! I am happy to see this and you! I look forward to what more you have in store. If you need a sound board you can certainly pm me. Authors here should stick together and keep this section going. With amazing writers like you, we'll have no problem of losing inspiration.

Keep up the awesome writing!

Hey, dear I finally found this lovely fic and I have to sy that the story is intriguing. Those ladies want Quatre awefully bad and I must wonder if the others will come into the mix, Ami's friends that is?

But I am looking forward to the guy's reactions when they see Quatre on Earth with Ami.

Please, please continue! As Nerf said, go back and reread your work and you will likely find inspiration, if that doesn't work, read the previous stories that had always inspired you!

We need wonderful writers like you still going strong!

Keep up the awesome writing, dear! Hope to see more of you soon!

THis is a very interesting story! One of which I hope to read more of soon...? Heh, anyways, writer's block is the pits! This story, however, is very good!

You have a great story on your hands.I really hope you pick it up.I'd love to see what happens when they meet up with the thanks for the soon.

WOW! MOREMOREMOREMORE! Poor Ami x.x That has GOTTA hurt badly. x.x Poor Quatre...He shoulden't be chased x.x Neither of them should

~Ami~

Wow! I really like this storyline so far.

Poor Ami. Poor Quatre. At least they have each other. :)

I hope you get a chance to update soon.

Omigod, is this going to be a quartre/ami fic? Woah, that is so cool. Did you notice that there aren't many of them in here. LIke ya story, do more plez!

This looks like a nice fic. Can't wait to read more.

Writer's block sucks so much... This is a really dramatic turn of events for Ami and Quatre... There's hardly any fics on them! Great fanfic

NOOOOOOOO! You just stopped it! Right there! Are you psyco! YOu can't do that! It's...it's...Wrong! I need another chapie! Hurry it up!

::sniffles:: Heaven is sooooooo cruel! ::sniffles:: Please continue! and um...shameless attempt at getting reviews..ehehe please R&R my fic 'death and the dark angel'? Please? Arigatou. Keep up the good work! heeheheh

Whoa... I can honestly say this is not like anything I've ever read before... How sad! So now they're both going to be condemned to Hell? Hmm, that just doesn't seem right... Please post more soon!