I'm really glad to see another chapter of "Always." You are very good with story ideas. I just really, really, really wish you'd take some writing classes so you could spell, capitalize and construct readable sentences and paragraphs.

I AM really enjoying this story

wow good chapter

Thanks for having Kate blow the Federal agent off, I thought you were gonna go all Watershed on us there for a second. Don't let he job jeopardize the health of her baby! Especially if he job will be cooperating with the creepy guy who was very unprofessional. He was hitting on Kate right there in the office.

Good luck, Kelly :)

Pretty good chapter, but I think I'd like the next one better...

Hi, I just now read this story from beginning to end in one sitting.

I'm an editor and would like to ask you a question. Please don't be offended. I would simply appreciate it if you could just answer my question as simply a question on it's own merits. Who knows? It may be as revealing to you as it would be to me.

Why do you write?

Thanks

Peter

I love the story great job just a few hints/ suggestions

- make sure you check your spelling

- read through your work there were a few random words

- keep going :)

this is my first reveiw i hope it helps

Please tell me the next chapter will be Kate telling Castle what Josh said. I'd really love to be abe able to "see" his reaction. Lanie and Kate chapters are always fun, which means that of course this one was, too.

Sweet! I love fluff.

LOL I loved the part with the sales lady. It was interesting seeing Kate a little out of her comfort zone and Castle stepping in. And then to have Kate's name be on the card without her being aware of it-great detective skills there, Kate! :)

Just finish. Very good, cann't wait for more.

I loved this chapter! I loved how Kate is becoming a surrogate mother toward Amber too! I loved how Alexis gave amber some clothes from Kate. I loved how Alexis gave Amber Kate's card with her and Alexis cell numbers written on it. I loved how Alexis invited Amber over to loft for dinner.

I loved how Amber accepted the invitation and appeared at the loft. I loved how Kate and Rick were trying to cook but Rick was doing something awful to the meal! Too Funny! I loved how they made a triple chocolate brownie recipe.

I loved after the dinner Kate was taken aside by Amber to talk. I loved how Alexis has told Amber about Kate's mother dying. I loved how Amber opened up to Kate about her father's death. I loved how Kate help the young girl to cope with that tragedy.

I loved how after the talk Amber and Alexis were going to have a laser tag game while Rick and Kate had to look over wedding plans. Please continue!

please writ more i love this story

love this chapter cant wait for the next's one amazing writing by the way :)