So. Touching... *crys out again*

Woah I'm just... Speechless. (see what I did there? ;) )

Uuuugh thinking of Stoic with out Hiccup is just...It's allot to take on! It makes me sad...
But It could of happened. I love that you saw that and bravely put words to it!

This story has brought tears to my eyes! This is a beautiful story!

I have thought of this ending many times before, never thought what it would cross somebody else’s mind. I liked the point of view from Stoick, but the relationship b/w Hiccup & Toothless I enjoy to follow more.

Great job, hope to see more about how Hiccup's death affects other people in the village and especially his death from Toothless' POV.

Aw, Poor Stoick. And Toothless in the last chapter. I hope they learn how to befriend dragons. Continue...

Oh no, poor Hiccup! This was so good! I loved hearing Stoick's thoughts and the correlation with Valhalarama. Great job!

I am crying! It was so amazingly well done, I LOVE it...well I love how well you wrote it I DO NOT love Hiccup DYING but you did so well...AHH ok I'll stop rambling and leave with a good job

this is sad

O.O *whimper* *whimper* *SOB SOB SOB SOB SOB SOB* That was so sad! Great job!

You killed my boyfriend.

Yeah, people have done fics like this before, but I liked yours. Nice and sad. T~T

Deep, saddening. Nice grammar and sentence structure, that's pretty rare to find in a fanfiction. Great job!