any now chapters coming up?

wow cool!

It was good, the only thing is that I was kinda confused when in the series it took place.

I loved it and i would love it if you continuied

NOOOOOOOOO! WHY?

Ohh, this is a hard choice...

Vlad.

And to thicken the plot, Vlad has a new device! It's like the Fenton's Porta-portal and his Plasmius Maximus (that's just as bad a name) combined, the Plasma-portal. It shorts out a ghost's powers and sends them back to the Zone. So basically, Vlad zaps Danny, it backfires and blows up, shorting out Vlad and Danny's powers and sending the whole class (plus Vlad) to the ghost zone. Vlad's secret revealed, and Danny's safe for the time being because Vlad can't prove he's Phantom because Danny can't transform.

If that's too much for you, just go for Vlad. *faves story*

I LOVE THIS STORY FRIENDYYYYYYYY. DANNY PHANTOM PHOREVER!

Good idea. A little unorganized. But ok.

I CHOOSE ALL 3. 1 CHAPTER EACH. DAN AS THE NEXT CHAPTER. BOX GHOST & VLAD AS ALT. ENDINGS & SUCH.

Vlad would be interesting, but it should be Dan cuz then everyone would be all 'That's why' and then there would be a huge huggie moment. But thats what I think, you don't gotta use it.

I vote for Vlad!

Let's just go with the box ghost for now. Then you can work your way to reveling more. Lol. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Update soon!

Hey, PhantomPhan67!

So I'm reading your story as I'm reviewing it, and so far I think it's pretty good! You're not a bad writer at all-wwaayy better than me when I first started out here, :P. I really like your story! The whole concept of Danny taking a class from his parents about ghosts is ironic and funny, and I feel like it has a lot of potential to go down so many different paths! (Also, that Sam is the one researching Danny Phantom is something that could lead to some cool romantic points in the story) :)

Danny?"

"Yeah Sam?"

"Freakshow's not a ghost."

"He was for a half hour."

"That no one will remember." -ha! Funny!

Some things you might want to keep in mind though as you continue writing are:

1. Having breaks in your writing, such as "Five Minutes Later," or "In the Hall," can actually deter from the flow of your story. It's usually more concise to just say at the beginning of the section's opening paragrasph, "Five minutes later found Danny, Sam, and Tucker in the hall..." etc, something like that.

2. Any number under 100 should technically be written out, but that's kinda nit-picky :P

3. Whenever you're using dialogue, be sure to guide the reader through who is talking. Occasionally, I got a little confused and had to go back and reread a section to understand who was saying what. Having short blocks of pure dialogue without a "Danny said" (or something like that) at the end of it can be very useful and effective, but only in short spurts of dialogue.

4. Background description always helps to bring a story further to life. What the characters are feeling, smelling, seeing, etc in relation to their surroundings helps the reader build a mental picture of what you want them to see.

5. Little, re-ocurring grammar thing:

"Yeah, we'll be back soon." Sam responded pushing Danny and Tucker out the door.

This sentence should technically have a comma between responded and pushing, because you're adding an extra phrase at the end of the sentence. (I'm not that great at grammar either, so don't worry too much! I just wanted to give you a heads up!) Anytime you use this type of sentence, there should always be a comma between your verb and the beginning of your phrase that further describes that verb.

6. "Sam then does the 'pfft' thing that Elliot did in Double Cross My Heart" -taking this action is also the equivalent of "waving away concern" E.G. "Pfft," Sam said, waving away his concern. "Forget it."

-It's usually best not to acknowledge that Danny Phantom is only a show within your story, because that depreciates what you're trying to say. Be sure to keep your readers inside your universe, and not suddenly remembering that that characters they're reading about are fake! (Even if they are, lol)

Hmm, so my mind is currently blanking on any other advice. I think if you just keep writing, you'll be amazed at what you can do. :)Keep up the good work, and update soon!

DAN! If not then Vlad I guess... I like seeing different stories of danny's secret revealed... You know what would be REALLY COOL? MAYBE you could do 2 or 3 alternate chapters... You know a version1: box ghost, Version2: Vlad, Version3: Dan, ... Maybe a version4: combination? Idk... I just thought it might be cool...

OMG the part where it's all like: Who's that? He's... Who's that? He's... Who's that?... XD awesomely hilarious!

Hm...I vote Vlad.