Do make it a story. It's super sweet.

Please, yes, make a story!

oh hello yes this is beautiful and i'm crying

YAY! This oneshot is becoming a story! I'm so happy! _ I love your stories. :-D

I so loved this! I'm sorry for the short review but I'm too sleepy right now.. thanks for sharing..

I have read almost every one of your stories, poems and trilogies, yet this small flick is my utmost favorite. Though your style is usually what gets me hooked, (you're so casual, yet not in a way that masks the emotion in your story) I wouldn't have noticed if you had written this in latin, I was so engrossed with Obi-wan's final demasking. Please make this into a full-blown story. I can understand that you don't want to post until you're done. I need to take that bit of wisdom myself, because things are becoming a tad bit hectic with me, too. Ah, the life of a writer, hmm?

multi-chapter would be much appreaciated, this one is very good.
I can understand your hesitation though, because I fear that the atmosphere that makes this story so special would be lost in other chapters.
either way, very well done, I love the idea

Are you kidding? This is great! I loce your stories, you should do more like this

It feels incomplete. I'm wondering where the rest of the story is. :)

"I would like it turned into a multi-chapter story. Please (begging puppy face)" I totally agree with that! Hahaha, anyway, the whole story is beautiful and intense, it really made me wonder if things would've turned differently. I loved it.

hey i would love this to become a story.

I would like it turned into a multi-chapter story. Please (begging puppy face)

This really does make you wonder; and it was beautifully well written.

I would certainly like it as a story!

Yes, yes, yes! I totally want this to be turned into a multi-chaptered story. Of course, I don't think the one conversation between Obi-Wan and Anakin would immediately cause changes, but would probably lead to more openness, more communication, and more understanding of the other between the pair. I look forward to seeing more from you!

would be nice to continue as a real story.