Those are some shtty friends. It's not like he doesn't already know everything they said. Could've just mentioned it and moved on instead of being pushy.

Thank god it was just a Ginny set up thing. It's really too bad that most people really were stunned that JKR chose her to be Harry's love interest in boos six and seven, after being such an unimportant character in books one through book five. That, I think) is why most authors do not write as a decent person. JKR did create the world of Harry Potter but, she really skrewed the pooch in pairing her with Harry. That is, of course, just my opinion. It is her franchise, she can do anything with it she wants. I doubt she cries while on the way to her bank, that I don't care for that pairing.l lol
Thanks for not killing Gabby or her family.
Ron Pate
Traveler301

Too much happiness makes me worry. I hope I'm wrong. Is it going to be Ginny that tries to mess everything up? Dark wizards hurting Gabby or her family, or Harry. Too much happiness is as bad as too much angst, where everything goes to hell in a hand basket and never gets any better. So, yeah now I'm worried.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

Question, is Gabby's Boss Dan just a sleaze bag or something a whole lot worse. I'm a little worried about her. I really do not want her hurt... Please!
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Ron Pate
Traveler301

I wish I could have met someone like Gabby before I got old. Oh!, Wait!, That's right, This site is called fan fiction for a purpose. See, that is why I say that you're a really good writer. You are making Gabby very real to us readers. Way to go!
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

Another great chapter. The more I learn about Gabby, the more I love her character and the ways in which you are developing her part in Harry's life. To say that she is good for Harry does not really say enough, and want to say Harry needs to be as good for Gabby as she is good for him. Gabby is the first character that I've seen created for Harry,( other than Hermione and Megan Jones), that I not just liked, but adored. You are doing a great job with this story.
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Ron Pate

I have held off reviewing your story as long as I can. I have a couple of things to say. First, this is a wonderful story and you are a very good writer. Second, Harry has found someone to love, that can and will love him as much as he loves her. I really like Gabby, she's great. The picture on the left side of your summery of each chapter is like a breath of fresh air. She is truly lovely. She reminds me of Gabrelle Union, who is a lovely young lady her self. I am really enjoying your story.
Thanks,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

Harry James Nigger-Potter potted himself a nigger.

Gabby and Harry relationship was very nice, but reusing Voldy as a villain was very weak and boring. Ginny was also totally OC.

Very nice OC so far, pleaseure to read.

I usually bypass, what I think up as "Mary Sues", but the cover picture was so beautiful, that I couldn't resist. I really liked this story, thanks for sharing.

I typically don't like stories like this one, but so far I'm really enjoying this and I think you're a really good writer! Can't wait to read more of this!

A nice story although the events about the secret were really predictable.

nice story
thank you for sharing

Fàilte. [Greetings]

Okay, Love your stories (Read both, and anxiously anticipating updates for "Third Time's..")
Love Gabby, Love your characterizations love/hate Ginny (What a sow) and I definitely wish to see much, much more from you.

That's the good bit

I'm not a grammar nazi, (god knows my own needs a lot of tweaking) and I let a lot go when I read fan fiction but, there was just one thing I couldn't let pass without comment.
Your line, Chapter 15 "Second Wind":
"Gabby was quickly cut off by Harry's swift kiss. She began to fight him but his persuasive menstruations eased the fight out of her and she found herself melting in his embrace. Several minutes later, Harry rested his forehead against hers. "I lied."

I think perhaps you meant "persuasive MINISTRATIONS" and did NOT intend to indicate Harry was experiencing his time of the month.

Spell check no doubt missed it because although it was an inappropriate word for the sentence it WAS spelled correctly

Made me Laugh though.

Again Love your work, Six stars out of five, Keep it coming.

Sìth [Peace]
Adarene Thorne