Reviews for Breach |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please please continue the story it took me awhile just to find this one again |
![]() ![]() ![]() dam i wanted to continue oh well, tsukiyomi should be fun, i hope it is like the genjutsu where the world goes blood red with the room and you trap them in an illusion |
![]() ![]() ![]() two zanpakutos each, and inner hollows. what fun. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...interesting story... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must . . . Respond . . . To . . . Guilt trip. Anyway, I was immediately drawn in by the summary. More particularly, it made it very clear that you've recognized the impossibility of death working that way in the Naruto dimension. This is something that annoys me about bleach crossovers. The whole "dies and goes to SS" thing wouldn't work half the time. I also like the way you brought them over. The execution's good too, though I'll admit that both of th having duel zanpakutos bugs me a bit. Typing on an iPod is a bitch, so that's it for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() More soon please this is a really great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story thus far. I am kinda hoping naruto will eventually be paired with naruto. I know that pairing is used a lot but it is not with out its reasons. They do seem like they have the potential to fit together really well. I am kinda thinking like soifon for sasuke. I dont know why but i think it could be good. I can not wait to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice plug with the poem from the Mt. Hakurai arc of Inuyasha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() not bad. though i wonder how this will go further in? like who will be paired with who. like nanao with sasuke and naruto with either rangiku or yoruichi would fit pretty well. can't wait for more to develop. until then, ja! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet chapter I like the fact that both naruto and Sasuke have two zanpakuto also I think think you should have Naruto paired with Yoruichi and Soifon update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet chapter I hope you have Naruto paired with both Yoruichi and Soifon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter |