Reviews for Grease Monkey
Shani8 chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
Awww... how perfectly in sync are they! :) This was yet another delightful piece from you! I loved it!

Now my only beef would be that it's screaming for more where you left off! Just one more chapter maybe where Steve compensates her FULLY for services rendered. That would be lovely, and I know you would write it beautifully. Pretty please, with sugar on top? ;)

Great work!

~Shani :)
twinsmother chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
I love everything about this story. I wish I could be a grease monkey with Steve. I was one with an ex but it would be nice to be one with Steve. There is nothing in this story that needs changing. It's perfect just the way it is.

Kim
Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
I liked this. Especially the way Kono was able to show Steve a thing or two or three, lol.

Thanks for sharing.
francis2 chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
What a nice bonding moment for them. Great!
11nivea342 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
First off

soooo glad kono didn't die in the finale! I admit I got nervous cause I heard rumors grace wanted to leave.

Also this piece is ADORABLE. the dialogue is perfect and I adore thr hand touching

and the little things and

the visit to the car

shop was the cutest. And her toenails!

Hope you write more

fic over the summer

for them cause I def

found it not them sharing a look at the end of the ep :D
Pop'n'Pop23 chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
that was soooo cute! Love it! amazing job
xxLily.RC chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
I've read all your Steve/Kono stories but this is my first review. And yes...I did love all of your stories :)So keep on writing!

I live in Australia so we're only on like episode 13. But when I heard that there is a new person and that Kono might die I got so sad! :(

But anyways, awesome fics! :)
aprofili chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Nice story! I hope they decide to keep Kono on the show. We get to see the finale next Monday.
alwaysateen chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I'm sure a lot of people told you that before me but it's not Kono and Kono's car that blow up! It's Laura Hills, the Governor's helper who appeared in two episodes before, 1.07 and 1.09 and Kelly Hu plays her character.

Me I was so happy to see that it was her who was blowing up but I have guess it with the promo pics.

Love your new story by the way and I'm sure that you gonna have plenty of new ideas this summer and when Season 2 will start because Kono, and Steve, are there to stay. :)
sammie28 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I wouldn't worry too much yet. I thought the promo gave away too much, actually - Kono's red car and the car in the explosion have different tops (the latter has a black top). I have to admit, it's bold..."H50" knocking off the character played by a native Hawaiian.

cute story!
E chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
loved reading it.
diana-of-wales chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Umm, you might want to watch the episode from earlier in the season that had the SEAL taking people hostage on the USS Missouri and then rewatch the promo. I think you will have a very different thoughts on who dies, because that's not Kono you see. :-)
sky chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
hi you, i m really glad to read a new story from you. and dont worry its not konos car. i from germany and have to wait a littel longer till i can watch this last episode, but i saw the new preview and the red car is not an chevi. like konos i think it was an BMW or an volvo. we have some really good pics in our fan forum were you can see the car exactly :) so dont worry i really dont believe they kill kono on the show.
Froggie2 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
I love the idea of them fixing up Steve's jeep...hey, any alone time together is all good in my book;-) Just the image of seeing Kono decked out in a black leather jacket riding on the back of a motor cycle with Steve...how hot would that be! That alone might just melt all the shave ice in Honolulu-. LOL

Btw...I wouldn't worry about Kono being killed in the finale. It wasn't her car that exploded and she wasn't in that car. They can't kill off one of the fab 4...if they did that, I would stop watching the show! :-)
Mary chapter 1 . 5/12/2011
Awesome story ! Please write more S/K stories !
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