Ooh, I like this. Very sad and dramatic and whatnot. (Plus, I like the song. Despite the fact that we're doing a really hard contemporary dance to it that I'm TOTALLY GOING TO FAIL AT. But, yeah.)

Good job!

(Sorry for not leaving a better review. XD)

Beautiful!

Definitely not who I expected, but it kinda makes sense. I don't think I've ever seen a multi-chapter songfic before, now that I think about it. It helps that the song was secondary in importance to the story itself. Well done!

Jeesh. Poor Sillabub. Er... poor all of them. This is genius :) It was a good three chapters. xD

I really like how you've been using the song- how it's not a songfic but you've been using it to fit your plot. I also like your loose sense of chronology, how everything is separate, but still fits a timeline. A very sweet and emotional piece- keep writing!

ohhhh! I love LonzoCassie, I usually see he being full of herself tho! but I love your interpretation of her, its a nice twist ;)

Demeter and Alonzo is cute to, I really love the writeing for them,poor girl, heart break really works for her character!

Nicely writen! I really enjoyed this :)

Yay! More chapters! *claps excitedly* Equally good, equally depressing, I feel like this one seems more complete though. I wonder who the next chapter will be about?

This is sad, but I laughed my butt off at Exotica's. "..she doesn't get out much. (Romance novels and dark chocolate? Yes."

Oh, God, you people always seem to know how to crack me up. xD

Even more sad! But it's good sad!

Hmm...This is really good, I like the switching perspectives, and how it established a bit of a chronology, and you capture the mood very well, but it feels like it's unfinished, like there should be some conclusion. Then again, real life doesn't have those. Nobody actually gets come-uppence. Nobody really likes the way things turned out. Now I'm all depressed. Still, great story. :)

Epic song, Epic way of using it, epic... um... plot? Epic story in general. Yes, I do believe you have won.

this is really good so far. :D I love Victoria/Plato :3 I hope you continue, maybe have a little bit of Plato's perspective? Id love for him to not be potrayed as such a bad guy xD

please continue!

Waiiiilll...sniffle...this is really good, just sad.

LOVEEEEEEEEEE the song! Love what you're doing with it (:. This story was fun to read, can't wait to see what you're doing next!