| Reviews for TKO'd |
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GT500RonSmith chapter 1 . 9/27/2014 That would have been interesting! Nice idea! |
Ky03elk chapter 1 . 1/11/2014 OMG where was the romance! Lol if i had of read that back then i would still be in the corner ;-) thanks |
Twyger chapter 1 . 11/8/2012 So prophetic for 4x23 ... are you SURE you're not AWM? Thanks for the great chapter - sorry I found it so late! |
someheartslove chapter 1 . 9/13/2012 I'm SO glad I'm spoiler free, and that I was spoiler free for that particular episode, too. I'm mean, I realize this was last year, but I just can't imagine you telling me half of that scene in advanced. BUT; it's SO awesome to read it from this point of view! I love how determined he is, how much he believes she loves him and how she wants to make her say it. Oh man, that was painful. I can imagine his face when she tell him that she does not love him. SO much hurt and pain in those blue eyes, and that still didn't make him leave. And the last detail, with him closing the door silently, not slamming them, just makes it more heartbreaking. He cam in with a bang, loud and there and never hiding his presence, so he leaves in totally opposite manner. Ah, you made me cry. |
Trekkenbeck chapter 1 . 8/24/2012 Wow. I think I have to report you...report that your stories are dangerously powerful; they need warning labels! I wasn't prepared for how powerful this piece would be. |
seekhappynights chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 There literally aren't words for how powerful this is. I feel like my heart is weeping. This is so much more intense than the actual Knockout episode. This is by FAR the best thing of yours that I've read, and that's saying something, because everything else is beautiful in its own way, but this... This is mind blowing. Heart-wrenching. Gut-clenching in its degree of passion. This is the kind of story that stays with a person; changes a person. "...this future she can see as easily as he can, shimmering golden and full of promise through the doorway of opportunity." "Her heart breaking, then the pieces freezing— broken—inside her..." "There are tears swimming in his ocean-colored eyes and he's not making any effort to conceal or hide what this conversation is doing to him." "...if she gets through the next few days, maybe he'll forgive her—and this tiny, fragile hope is the only thing holding her upright." "...his mouth descends and he kisses her like the world is ending. And maybe it is." "'It isn't enough to stop you from killing yourself with this; it isn't enough to make you stay safe with me.'" "He doesn't slam the door; it closes quietly. She shatters anyway." |
DetectiveBen chapter 1 . 5/26/2011 thats deep |
bones35 chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 Liked this chapter a lot; creative from a short sneak peek. Good job in emoting great emotion from Beckett and Booth. |
Steeldust-01 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011 Great writing! Sad, heartbreaking and just perfect! |
44musicfreak44 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011 Great take on the scene, so much passion! Loved it. |
castlebeckett siempre chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 excellent but sad I like so :( |
LittleLizzieZentara chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 This is just heart-wrenching. But considering the preview, I think this would be a great way for things to happen. And we know Caskett's not going to die-the show would be over and they have a whole 4th season to write yet. |
Syd15 chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 Heartbreaking but beautiful! I hope you keep weitibg! |
VACastleFan chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 Fantastic! |
jjship chapter 1 . 5/12/2011 Wow ! I tear up reading this - and I doubt the show will have the same power (it may.. I am not sure I could survive it) Thank you |