I love this story I wish u would continue it. Please!

OHMYGOD! NOOOOOO! please please pleeaassee dont dicontinue it! just rewrite it! noooo! you have to rewrite it! its an awesome story! soooooo amazingly genius! you cant discontinue it! if you need help rewriting i can help edit or something but dont abandon the story! :O

rewrite it if you want but please continue it

I'm so sad that I got to chapter the end of chapter ten and then couldn't read anymore. I love this story and I wish you would continue it. Please post another chapter. I really like Maria being in this story despite my hatred for her. Don't ask why i just don't like her and love Jasper and Alice together. Keep writing please.

~Sarah

i reviewed for chapter 10 but i forgot to add this: i think that maybe jasper will kidnapped by the mystery murderer and so alice will have to come save him. then he will be like wtf? how did you find me? blah blah.. and THEN alice will be lke umm yeah im a vampire and i can see the future. (of cousre they wont say it that way.) so when he finds out they have a happy ending! lol :) something along those lines. great writing. please pleasee update more!

wow. i think they should stop talking to each other like edward and bella. but im just not seeing edward and bellas happy ending yet. what happened to the car crashh? and then port angeles? i understand its not supposed to be exactly like twilight but the way the story is going its making me doubt that edward and bella are ever going to fall in love with each other. anyways its an awesome story and youre a great writer. please keep writing more! thanks :)

awesome. Awesom! AWESOME! i really love it! you should sooo do alice's pov! please please write more! :O

I love your story it is a fun twist on twilight! I love the closeness between Rose and Jasper.

Hi first of all let me say i love this and i'm think yes they should, but you with them both pining to talk to each other again right? I don't know maybe it's just an idea, but still. Please keep going i'm rooting for Alice and Jasper 3 i love them togethe like Edward and Bella, but i loooove Alice and Jasper 3 thanks for writing this :) keep writing !

~Sarah eager reader lol

Please have him find out soon I would love for him to know I think you should have Bella find out first then bring in the creepy guy that said he wanted Jasper and there you should have him find out but in the end it all up to u great job can't wait to read more

amazing love it and for jasper learning the cullen secret the sooner the better maria is such a bitch hate her and alice and jasper should talk about it instead of avoiding each other can't wait to read more

Yay! I got a mention! XD

This chapter is good...

I think...That Jasper should get into some sort of danger right before he figures out that the Cullens are vampires...(like, "Right infron of him" danger... Like maybe he's about to get mugged or somthing... Then Alice or Emmett comes along and saves him!)

I think Alice and Jasper should stop talking... Just for a little while though!

Awesome Chapter!

i have an idea what if you have jasper be coll with being alice's and ask her out?

Well, what you could do is try and tie everything in a bit more with the original book to give you some more ideas. Also, maybe you should explore more with the character of Maria. Also you could consider if Jasper is going to get caught up in the Southern vampire wars somehow. It would also be interesting if these other characters who we do not know about were drawn into the story more. Also, are we going to have Victoria and James having an appearance some time later. Just some ideas.