I agree it should had been Naruto x Sakura in cannon Naruto. Sadly I knew it wasn't going happen. Kishimoto favorite female character was Hinata and he own Naruto so we end up with Naruto x Hinata. True cannon Naruto pairing removed due to Kishimoto playing favorites. That why I don't watch or read Naruto next generation. Plus they made Anko fat wtf.

damnit. the story is strange but really good and i hoped to read more chapter.

The neji thing made no sense. Unlike the original the guy was caught alive. Just because he supposedly died on his way back to the village doesnt mean they could pin it on the hyuuga. That's seriously pushing it and the story doesnt rly get anything out of it for doing that.

Also for the comment at the end of the chapter. Their worries are stupid. This story is rushing through with little interaction with anybody. Him and hinata are on the same team but look how there was almost nothing so far. With his marriage request to save her changes next to nothing.

Hell he IS married to anko but even then theres been a few little blips of convo and his talks with kurenai have dwindled to next to nothing.

Hell haku vanished up till just now.

The authors comment at the end of this chapter makes me want to shake his hand.

Story wise this all seems too damned rushed and hes lacking on interactions. Also I'm seriously confused about narutos tenant. Is boa a new form of biju or is she the kyuubi of the story? She was mentioned to only have 3 tails and not 9 which is a big downgrade.

Also kurenai is his teacher and hes a walking chakra tank but even she isn't teaching him any jutsu.

Theres other stuff but this was enough to mention.

I like the way it ended I wish Sasuke die plus Naruto x Sakura was never going to happen I mean sakura was a bad charter so what I’m saying is suck it’s up

This was a nut without a spanner
You wrote a story that not many can understand.
The characters of naruto is like one in million.
And all the author ,who are willing to write not are writing all based in naruto world.
Take your time and watch the one piece fully.
And create a plot lime for naruto

Great story I really liked it a shame that it looks like you gave up on it because it was getting good.

Well to be fair Luffy does need Nami and she beat a cp9 by herself and several grunts and fought miss double finger in alabasta. But Kakashi is a useless person how basically let his two students suffer due to his clear favouritism to Sasuke

*winks at Hinata* he truely is the greatist isnt he?

I actually think the men with robins powers is dangerous after all don't forget that if robins flower hands get hurt it also hurts her so she would have to release the person before her Hutus hits

Rty

Nise fic

Who the hell is "Buggy The Vice Admiral's Kuma Double Finger Valentine Arlong" that's one hell of a long name. It almost seems like a bunch of names... But wait! Where's the commas that would separate those individual names into their proper spaces. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to reread the entire series and look for whoever the hell "Buggy The Vice Admiral's Kuma Double Finger Valentine Arlong" is, because I sure don't remember him/her.

You seem to have forgotten that being a rubber man means that the most a bludgeoning attack can do is move you around, unless actively augmented by something like Haki or chakra.

grow the fuck up god the series ended alright your just bitching cause it didn't go the way you wanted it and now your taking your anger on us the readers that like to read your stories please grow the fuck up and go back to writing this story don't put it up grow up gets some balls and keep writing cause this is sad stop trying to take out on us cause thats what your doing grow the hell up