Reviews for Harry Potter and the Devil's Bargain
Guest chapter 3 . 10/31/2018
SHIT whoever wrote this is wierd
TemperanceBooth1 chapter 8 . 5/21/2016
Why's this one up for adoption? It's a WONDERFUL story. Keep going.
RavendeskWriter chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
Hmm...interesting so far. Kind of reminds me of that show Reaper.
LatinStoryteller chapter 8 . 7/19/2012
Are you going to finish this story?
LCF chapter 8 . 3/13/2012
More I say..! I demand it at once! Update..! Like there's no tomorrow! (~begins chanting maniacally!~) "The Power of your fans, Compels you..!"

I have seen "Dark H/Hr" - I have even seen "Evil! H/Hr"; But "Satanic Harry..?" that's a new one! (& one I'm hoping to see more of! ~discreetly offers bribe!~)

Great stuff, all of it! Cannot wait to see more!

LCF
GBTtown chapter 8 . 1/8/2012
Wow! A really great story. Look forward to reading more.
janjan2009 chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
lol
janjan2009 chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
lol unique start
katzlol chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
What would we ever do without wikipedia? -smiles fondly-
harryhermionealways chapter 8 . 9/29/2011
Interesting story and I like it. Hermione should know not to leave Harry, but at least she came back.
Paladeus chapter 8 . 9/29/2011
Hidy hidy,

Probably my only real dislike, outside of the curiously large number of typos, is that Harry didn't manage to save Luna before she got raped the first time and that he held off on helping her when knowing what was happening to her (though I agree that rushing in right away would have served no purpose.)

Tying into the previous, I'm an avid Harry/Hermione shipper. I prefer H/Hr/Luna, but still. So, I'm glad to see Hermione came back to him. Wasn't thrilled she betrayed him to begin with, but then again, she was stupid enough to allow it the first time around. It was just luck that she stuck around. No clue what was wrong with her in the last few books.

I think I've figured out what you're planning to do with the Hallows and the symbols, but I guess we'll have to see. I was originally thinking you'd have gone the way of Keanu Reeves, but it seems you're going a slightly different route that he didn't have. Either becoming the "Master" of Death means he is above the Devil, or he offers them in trade *shrugs*. I'm personally suspecting the latter of the two just because it's neater.

I was kind of hoping Hermione'd end up being dark. But, trying to save the day and bossing around a guy who has an uncontrollable urge to maim, murder, torture and who knows what else and smacking him around on the head makes all sorts of sense, too. o.o That girl has got NO sense of self-preservation.

I was also suspecting Ron to end up dying at Harry's hand. I mean, it'd been a couple days since his last kill. But, I figured he'd try to get answers from him, too.

I'm a little surprised you said there was only one chapter left. I was thinking this would go a little further than a dozen chapters.

C2'd and hoping to see more of Veil soon. Or another darker story. There aren't many decent H/Hr dark stories that I've been able to find. And I haven't found a SINGLE H/Hr/L Dark fic. Well, unless you count a large harem, but those are generally horrible and, while I don't mind smut, they don't have anything EXCEPT that and it is always with far too many people. So, just sticking with Dark H/Hr is good for story quality. Well, if I could find more of them.

Adieu,

Paladeus
XHush-HushX chapter 8 . 9/24/2011
Loving the many changes and can't wait to read more. I wonder what's up with the diadem is it even a Horcrux in your story? Anyways can't wait so update asap please!
XHush-HushX chapter 7 . 9/24/2011
Dun dun dun...Voldermort got the Elder Wand and Harry is feeling it happen! Glad they don't trust Ron I'm just hoping they don't forget to obliviate his memory to erase everything he knows.
XHush-HushX chapter 6 . 9/24/2011
Seriously your story is amazing evrutime I get to the end I just want to go to the next chapter but i owe it to you to at least give you a review for writing this amazing interesting story. I just wanna know what the hell is Ron doing coming back? After what he said about Hermione being his whether she wanted to or not I just don't trust him. And all that jealousy he has toward Harry? Yeah don't trust him.
XHush-HushX chapter 5 . 9/24/2011
Damn watch out for Harry! He's powerful and I love it! I'm happy Harry and Hermione kiss but sucked they were interrupted. Great story so far I'm really liking it.
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