Excellent glimpse into Ryder's mind. Love him looking out for his people so fiercely.

I can totally imagin Ryder acting like that. great story. love it

Eeeee! So cute man ! I love it! I hope you have more kick ass listener story's

Excellent job. I am excited to see if Toby tells Ryder. I think you did a great job at expanding a relationship that has been hinted at in previous episodes. Very well written and I loved the descriptions of Toby too just because I'm a fangirl. lol. Can't wait to read more of your listener fic.

Very good writing, we need more of Ryders' POV in fanfic, this was a good read, keep up the good work! :-)