This was just lovely! I only have the tiniest nitpick re: using others' voices. You say that only the weak-willed can be manipulated that way but, huh, Cabanela in chapter 15? But it's an infinitesimal nitpick, obviously, and I've enjoyed this fic so much! Great missing moment, great Yomiel, really interesting thoughts and reflections throughout the fic! -laughingmango

Wonderful account of the "manipulator's" motives, fears, and dreams-really helps you understand Yomiel! Awesome

Overall a nice read; could have been expanded and gave a feeling of speeding it up in the near-end. You could have made it burn a little slower, but the fact that you didn't doesn't take away that this is a gorgeous piece. :)

Aagh, I love this! So much emotion (for an unfeeling dead person Yomiel has a lot of emotional anguish), moving from isolation and depression to exhileration and back agian.

And the bit about slipping into a groom's body to see what it felt like...heartbreaking.

*smiles* It's a pretty interesting fic, and I loved that part about Yomiel being awkward practicing that song, makes it so real. *laugh* Not a lot of people expose how Yomiel's still just a nerd at heart, something I firmly believe in. I especially liked the glee in which he ruined the song, that was awesome. [I think I was grinning along with him... I'm evil, I know.]

I want to ask tho: The song that was chosen by Yomiel is called Secret Rendezvous. Bailey mentioned it, as well as the fact that it's the middle of an encore that Yomiel hijacked. So... does this fic follow the game, or have you changed the song title for a particular reason?

Hey there, thanks for the great fic! I'm so excited to see more writing for ghost trick, such an awesome game! I really like the duality of yomiel and the bits between him and sissel were too cute :3 Good Work!