This is one of the most professionally written stories I've seen on this website. If there is anything I can do to get you to keep writing, I will do it. Keep up the good work!

Very impressed by the story, like it more than your fallout 3 story.

Misses some things from the trailer, always loved the intro to vegas

recently got done reading your FO3 story (what's published anyway), decided to check this out. noticed a typo. i'm assuming you meant to type sordid, but you wound up typing sorted.

Please update this.

You sir, are a master of writing these fallout stories. I hope you can improve upon what you are given and write like you would an actual novel. Also out of curiosity are you also going to be doing the dlcs for both stories like a separate story or after the main plot is over.

Ya know, I never noticed the girls dancing in the fountain until I read your description of it and went back to look at the cinematic again.

Love your work .
keep it up!

You dead? You haven't posted In ages.

plase updats this

Hope you contine this story because I am really enjoying it as much as the wandering pair keep up the good work.

Great chapter. Looking forward to what comes next. To be honest I'm hoping that Sunny tags along with the courier or something. Just a thought.

Alright alright! I love the intro. Maybe just maybe the Doc was just a little toooo nice with all the weapons and ammo but hey a courier ready to rock and roll is all good by me. Have the Courier start out all badass western kicking ass in post apocalitia and all that... But NO! Return to the wandering pair immediately! Damnit ok ok No no I won't be that way...(sulks) Writing projects do need a break and airing ideas you've obviously had for a while is a good idea before you lose track of them, but I love the Wandering Pair! (eyes narrowed) I saw the words SHORT break and I'm holding you to that!

Can't wait to see how this story turns out later on. From simple beginnings to the Second War of Hoover Dam, I'm excited to see how much trouble the Courier will get into with the Legion and NCR.

From your little nod to Ulyssies I deduce that you'll be incorporating the DLC's into the story. Can't wait for those either. Courier Six talking to the Think-Tanks and meeting Joshua at Zion and his confrontation with Elijah in the Sierra Madre vault and Ulyssies later on at the Great Divide.

Well, I can honestly say, it's nice to see this story get some attention. I was expecting it to lay sitting for at least several more months.

It's good. Can't think of much to say that I didn't in my review for chapter one. Though... no Vault 13 Canteen? Really? Tut tut! I'm a tad disappointed. Jay Kay, Elle Oh Elle. XP

Though, I noticed you include a nod to Ulysses that wasn't there before. At least, I think it wasn't there before... Meh. My memory doth sucks.

I think I might have caught an implication that Sunny used to be a tribal... Hm...

Personally, I'm debating whether to expand upon Malcolm Holmes in Unknown Origins. You know, the guy who randomly runs up to you after you pick up your first Sunset Sarsaparilla Star Bottlecap. He says you might meet again, but you never do. It's tempting, but I'm heavily debating on what I should do with him, and whether I should. A lot of players found him annoying, oddly enough. I personally loved the guy.