Not sure if I've said this before or not, but I especially like the " walloping great elephant of tension". Fabulous!

(I'm doing a GND re-read, and saw the link to this story. Cheers!)

holy crap this is really good!

Dawww! Poor Jareth, hope he does get it in the end, and Sara too. _

I love this. I haven't read Roommates in awhile, so I'm reading this particular story as simply as Sarah/Jareth interaction. (I do know the setup of the comic though.) The interplay of emotions here was really nicely done. I especially like how Sarah admits, at the end, that perhaps she does feel something... or does she? g That was done with a deft touch.

Enjoyed this very much!

Clare

Very cute, and a nice companion to GND. Keep it up!

~misunderstoodemon

I LOVE The movie, LOVE the two comics and now LOVE the fanfic :) Thank you so much for continuing something I adore checking for on Dev.

Nice job with this. I can definitely see this happening, and I thought you had a nice take on what might be running though his head when she asked that question and he had to face another possible reality. I felt really heartbroken for him in that moment. Very glad that she turned around. Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing! :)