Reviews for Hestia: Goddess of the Hearth
Daphne chapter 1 . 8/19/2018
I LOVE IT! Hestia is my favorite goddess!
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 4/20/2018
Dear Hestia:

Um… not that I don't suppose she'd appreciate this, but… it's not exactly the Aeneid, is it? I mean, she didn't say that nobody would ever write a free-verse lyric about her.

Oh, well. It was kind of a stupid line, anyway, given the kinds of deities that Statius gave starring roles to in the Thebaid. (What do you want to bet Riordan's never even heard of that?)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth
JWNET chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
NICE
Latias876 chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
So sweet :3
Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
I love it, simple and sweet and you are right about all of it
Kelly chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Omg I love it! You sound so passionate about Hestia, but you also do in your other poems! I have full awe in you
Scribe of Worlds chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
not bad. I am not usually a fan of poems but I actually enjoyed it, but it was a bit short.
suggestion. you might want to write in the style of the old epics, like six lines in a stanza, and probably about three or four stanzas. Maybe more if it is a story. Just saying. No offense meant. Your poem is good. I just have different tastes, that's all. I enjoyed it, though.
bluebell11 chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
OMG! THIS IS AWESOME! I COMPLETELY LOVE IT WHEN PEOPLE RECOGNIZE HOW IMPORTANT HESTIA IS!
tara chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
its good but it doesnt really ryme
LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I love it! Hestia was always my favorite!
Lmb111514 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
This was nice, I liked it.
Taco chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
This is very good poetry.
TribalGirl chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
This isn't exactly an epic poem, but who cares, this poem is still epic! Ehhh... I mean it's not epic in the traditional sense, but it's still awesome. Now Hestia gets an epic poem about her! *dances around the room for no particular reason*

Have you tried free verse? I think you should. There are a ton of free-verse poems in the 39 Clues fandom - in fact, if you search "free verse", 39 Clues contains the fifth most results. I haven't actually published any free-verse - I'm working on one now, but it's not done yet. It's kind of hard, but if you do it right, it really adds a lot to the poem. If you want any examples, go check out the 39 Clues free-verse poems by VampyrycPineapple (yes, it's spelled that way). They're awesome!
PureAwesomeness13 chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Awwww! I love this poem! I think Hestia does deserve more appreciation. I love this poem! Please keep writing! :D
flipntwist chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
Great poem! Hestia is simply amazing!
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