Im really disappointed, this story hasn'tq been updated in like 3 years, so all I can assume is that the author died or that this amazing story was abandoned which sucks.

i have to ask... are you by chance french?

I love this story and hope an update appears soon!

This is wonderfully written and I hope you'll choose to continue writing it.

Why did you stop?

Nice chapter! Elysium is rarely shown like this so I really want to see what's next. Hope the next chapter is coming :)
There are also a few typos in this chapter. you've written "thou" in stead of "though". There was something else but I'm afraid I forgot what it was. Still overwhelmingly positive though!

RFP

Holy crap your back! I'm so freaking excited ... I have had this story in my list since 2013! And it has a new chapter I'm so freaking excited ... Also very good chapter :)

I will put this bluntly here: your style is dreadful. Besides the little grammatical mistakes, your sentences have little flow or power to them. Perhaps you should invest in a beta. A skilled beta is very good at making you sound better.

The plot is slow, but quite agreeable. I personally enjoyed it.

So can we expect more updates soon?

I love this story can't wait until the next chapter

Glad to see you haven't given this up! When i read this chapter, i did see dime trouble spots for spelling and grammar but nothing too crazy. It has been long enough though that I'll be rereading the entire story as well. This chapter was paced very well in my mind, can't wait to see how you write the elysium battle.

Yey!/No!/Yey!

Glad to see you back posting again, don't worry about the fact its not been betaed, everything seemed to read fine, and as with the chapters before 11 was interesting and enjoyable to read. As for my No and last Yey, "No its the Batarians and with their shooting/slaving/rapey tendencies Laura is at risk!", "Yey we're going to get to see N7's kicking slaver ass!"

Now the question is will we get a 'Humanity! F*** Yeah!' to make up for the seemingly inevitable death or capture of Laura.

muy bien

Well that was a massive cliffhanger. Can't really give you an indepth review because frankly every chapter to this story has been fantastic. A few spelling errors recently but you said you no longer have a beta so that can't be helped. I really hope that you update this sooner than last time because what you have here is absolutely brilliant and nobody else has ever been able to follow through with such an idea in the way that you have. I tip my hat to you Sir. Don out.

A Tacoma was nice in 2001, not so much now xD

I've got the rifleman's creed on my lighter, well, most of it anyway.

I'm not going to write anymore huge reviews until the later chapters, they take a lot of effort xD