I loved this short story, and how it was written in another perspective.

Best story ever! Totally awesome!
I'm actually interested in the story they were acting-seems intriguing too...
Anyways awesome!

Aw! That was amazing. It was truly something. I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!

Really sweet story! Unexpected fluffiness.

Bravo! I loved this!

OMG i LOVE! this was soo awesome!

That was ADORABLY SWEET I loved it:)

I loved it! it was awesome! i really hope there is a sequel!

A very excellant crafted original story great job.

I liked it very much ... it's funny but on the other hand has also angst and it is well written ... I loved how you wrote Sesshoumaru's insecurity about Kagome's feelings towards him ... very nice

I just adored the scene when the two are just watching the sunset while embracing each other ... what was so beautiful and simple and yet so powerful

but what I liked the most was the fact that you manage to capture the reader's attention fully ... I was all the time thinking "why isn't he confessing for crying out loud?" or "why the hell doesn't she trust her friends when they tell her about his feelings?" and questions such as this

a very pleasant reading and enjoyable

~sayuri~

Wow that was freaking hilarious! I loved kagomes attitude :P Good job. It was a really good story. Kept me on edge the entire time :P