update this amazing story

I hope you'll continue it eventually.

This story is precious. I've been waiting for it.

Continue please!

can you please continue you have a great story here and very different from the rest so far. so please tell me you will continue even if it is 6 years from now

I am back again - sniff - still no updates. Yes you have a few grammar issues - but the writing is still very well done and I hope you haven't given up on this story.

tiny easy to fix tweeks

(Never seen me. Never even dreamt of me, or so I believed. Because of his actions of staying away from my life, I never asked anyone how he's been.)

I would restructure this a little...

He never did come to see me. I don't believe I ever haunt his dreams like he crashes into mine sometimes. My life exists without him. I do not ask about him. He let any love, affection or forgivness between us simply dry up and blow away.

(The horror of Peeta when Quino, of 4 years old, thought Haymitch was Peeta's father.)

Not of, but four -or perhaps

Peeta was filled with horror when four-year-old Quino assumed that Haymitch must be Peeta's father. Haymitch is the closest thing to a Grandfather my children will ever know. (then I would add how Haymitch feels about the role -is he pleased - annoyed - a different person with the children - afraid of them because he cares for them more than he has ever loved anything?) (give us a glimpse of the mentor turned softy or the clueless old bachelor)

I am not telling you what to do - just pointing out a few things that may improve the clarity. Take me with a grain of salt. The only part I wish to be bossy about is that I really want to see an update? This is such a fun story and if you abandon it I am going to be bugging you anyway -grin. So you may as well resolve yourself to writing it - hehehehe. Pretty, pretty please?

plz update soon i like that katniss likes peeta

peeta does love katniss right?

oh this is cute cuz this time katniss does loves him and she always between lovers that sounds cute

Ahh! This story's so good! Update as soon as possible-I'm sure everyone reading this is on pins and needles for the next chapter. I think it's really clever how the characters are saying lines from the real universe and Peeta is having dreams about this alternate world where he's married to Katniss. Update soon!

like it

I like the story but I don't understand it

I am so confused! I like this story, but I can't tell, did Katniss and Peeta already go through the Games or was it all just a dream?

This is so odd and facinating - what a cool story - can't wait for more!

I love the idea behind this story and I can't wait to see where else you take it! You have a good perception of Katniss and I enjoy how you write her. Keep it up!