Hey Freaky, it’s been awhile since i’ve read any of your work. I’m happy to see you’re still at it. Loved this one, sort of a combo of growth spurt and angel among us. Keep it up, I can’t wait to see what happens next!

I’m slowly slowly going through year old email updates. Slow updates are still good 3

Hey, this fanfiction is super good, come back to it at some point? I'm dying to know what happens! I love the concept of the story and you're doing such a good job with making all the characters believable for this situation. I especially love Kratos being so protective and Lloyd being so defensive.

I will be honest. Most AU stories tend to be rather typical in their execution. And often, it doesn't reflect well.

But here, with this... Completely opposite. An innovative idea, lots of fluff, and such a joy to read. I really did not want to reach the end so soon. This is honestly some amazing work.

Lloyd taking on the role of father is nice, especially since he does have a close friendship with Colette. But this change of roles from the Chosen being Colette to their child was a shocker. And that's where I feel you shine. Now we get to follow Lloyd on a different journey: saving his family from Mithos and Cruxis. It's a premise I certainly didn't see coming.

Arie is probably one of the cutest characters to be introduced. Not to mention how she loves Lloyd so much, and trusts him despite all the weirdness around him. I really do hope you explain why Lloyd activated the seal at the Triet Ruins later down the line, but it's a nice concept to complicate the matter of the Journey of Regeneration.

And Kratos. Man oh man. Seeing that guy turn because of his granddaughter and son, and knowing what it will cost him. You sure know how to spin them.

Overall, I like what you got going for this story. Hope you update soon, cause you got a new reader. Till then,

Ja ne

So... I just binged this. Dad!Lloyd is my new favorite thing, and I'm loving all of the other characters so far, too! If you decide to continue, I'm excited to see where it goes!

Sweet a update! And please don’t cut off Presea’s head.

Look. Can you stop using "weakly" as your primary descriptor of facial expressions. It makes the context of them odd. How the hell does someone smirk weakly anyways?
This is s good story but for Love's sake expand your facial adverb vocabulary.

Kinda on the short side, but who's complaini'n.
Im looking forward to some more daddy guard drama, or some Yuan kaifei messing wuth Kratos. Thats always fun, though its not MY story, so I'll just wait for whats n
ext.;D
Thanks for the update. Much love: Curryboh.

OMG YOU UPDATED

I'm sorry I swore I read this sometime back but HOW COULD I HAVE NOT FOLLOWED THIS FAVOURITED IT? FIXED AND SO SORRY. YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL AND AMAZING FIC. I love the premise and the focus on Lloyd being a dad and I totally totally dig this story so much -fangirling could not be stopped, please reset-

-reset-

Okay. Reviews matter a lot, and I should have reviewed every chapter. REALLY. Writer's Block is awful and I totally understand. -hides abandoned fics-

Hope you're doing great lately!

There's going to be a fight soon.

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Hello, just wanted to review for you. I'm still reading this so keep on keeping on!

Was that long haired, red head, husband of sheena, could it be Zelos? XD exciting.

Though I have to admit I don't remember much of what has happened recently. Perhaps a nice recap for the next chapter?

I'm glad to see this updated. I actually just reread it the other day!

So Kratos is still there, and Zelos isn't as undiscovered as he hopes. I wonder how it'll all play out...

I recently watched a short film called "piper" and I think Arie is similar to the protagonist vof that film, she always makes me want to pinch her wittle cheekies! you're amazingly talented kudos.

Hmmm, I feel like something bad is about to happen here. Maybe like Cruxis ambushing the group or something. Arie calling Kratos "Grandpa" is just too cute to bear if I'm perfectly honest. I'm pretty sure that if it was physically possible, my head would just explode from the cuteness.

...And the reference back to Raine's crazy obsession with ruins was funny and I loved that she used Arie as some sort of excuse to go there.

Anyways, nice fic and I hope you update.