Reviews for Kitsune kenjutsu |
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ArchAngel-Kagome chapter 4 . 3/30/2013 Can't wait to see more. |
Tomoki14467 chapter 4 . 3/10/2013 i wish you would continue this was the first story i have ever read on this site and it is what got me hooked on fanfiction so please continue this amazing story |
sortofbored chapter 4 . 3/9/2013 Cool story so far. Keep it up. |
Olaf74 chapter 4 . 2/11/2012 *removes his Jaw from the floor* BLOODY HELL! You are full of surprises! In the positive turn i mean. Please continue the story very very soon. |
FF's Nightmare chapter 4 . 6/21/2011 Awesome |
Hellcleaner chapter 4 . 6/21/2011 nice story |
Clove15 chapter 1 . 6/10/2011 Kushina to the rescue. |
AnimeFreak622 chapter 4 . 4/30/2011 :DDDDDDDDDDDD Yayz another chapter. Woot woot! and the fights did seem better then in the first one. Im happy you kept the Wolf summoning :3 Me and Midnight are happy. And to sahow it me and Midnight will kill this monster. -Midnight attacks it- Heh. Electrical current no justus! -kills monster- :D Anyway until next chapter Dude!~ ~Okami-chan~ |
XxVelvetxX chapter 4 . 4/29/2011 i thought the monster killed u last chapter, *wipes forehead in relief* good thing i reviewed lolz, u should put more commas, colons, and semi-colons or sumthing cuz some of the sentences in this chapter i had to re-read b/c they were like mased together.. for ex: "They had sparred ran 8 miles done three hundred and fifty push-ups and sit up before Sakura just couldn't go on it turn six and Naruto and Sakura both wanted to eat something" o had to read it twice cuz it didnt have any breaks in the sentence, well i hope my criticism makes sense, but other then that little mistake throughout the chapter, i think u did very well, i loved it! ~Kayla~ |
Darious Frost chapter 4 . 4/28/2011 Though I'm not sure I like the idea of replacing Naruto and Minato's original summons, I actually really like the idea of having the contract signed by 2 that wish to protect each other and have a very strong bond. Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next one! |
Luiz4200 chapter 4 . 4/27/2011 I see you removed that little misunderstanding where Sakura thought Naruto underestimated kunoichis. |
dude 24 chapter 4 . 4/27/2011 nice chapter its better then the original review cannon appears in my hand and i fire and try to force the monster to go away |
TakaRaiIshikawa chapter 4 . 4/27/2011 Just to keep the monster from eating you i will review. Dont really have much to say other then i like this and keep going. Does Sauske ever come to see the light? |
DarthMarek chapter 4 . 4/27/2011 great story so far. I have read the original version, and I am impressed with this rewrite. Keep up the good work. But in order for a good story flow, I believe you should add some interactions with Naruto's other classmates, or more specifically the future Rookie 9. I got nothing else to say at this point in time. |
gbphilster chapter 4 . 4/26/2011 Darn you, why must you make this one of my favorite stories, oh yeah because it's just as good as the original. I love this story so much and it's good to see you bringing it back. update soon bro! |