Oh! This is so interesting! I really hope you continue this story! It would be awesome! :D

Wow, i loved it! Thats just breathtaking!

I really hope this isn't just a one-shot. This was soo good. I hope you continue it, I want to know exaclty what Shane did, I have an idea but I'm not quite sure.

Wow! That was just breath taking. I really, really liked it.

I hope it's nto a lot to ask but, is it poosible for you to promote my song Fighting for Air please? And just get people to read it. Please and thank you.

wow. Now that was epic and and and there's NITCHIE!

I loke you loser

Goshhh... This was good! It might just be on of my new favorites! :O

Poor Mitchie... Kind of, but but but she found someone new, so thats good :D

- Nat