Absolutely fantastic. You always produce the awesomest stories, this one is no exception!

PEACE :P

I think you captured the feeling of this scene quite well. I haven't really thought about how Shizune could be relate to Dan. (Was that canon?)

I notice that most of your stories have a dreamlike quality to them, which I like, but have you ever tried writing in another style? Just a thought.

Anyway, congratulations on your eight-hundred and eighty-eighth story. Eight's a lucky number. :)

poor tsunade! both of the male sannin die kind of close to each other. its so sad how everybody close to her dies.