Reviews for The Ancient Empires
guest chapter 3 . 1/18/2016
This is interesting can't wait for the next chapter 4
bendablebananas chapter 3 . 11/8/2015
Psssst!

You should finish this!
Riluo Beijing Kirkland-Wang chapter 3 . 7/23/2013
Don't forget about China! He's an ancient too, most people just don't know it.
Hawthorn Tree chapter 3 . 11/3/2012
I'm intrigued, you should really continue this, despite how much time has passed.
SaiChanTheArtistGirl-Risa chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
WONDERFUL story. :3 i love it! X3 keep writing!
Kitsugun4 chapter 3 . 2/2/2012
Ancient Macedonia: Lysistrata of the Wild Hounds? My OC! Yes she has a pack of wild hounds. Training mother of Alexander the Great!
Anylinde chapter 2 . 8/17/2011
Lovely story! It's being alerted right... done. :) Do add some scandinavian action, please! (&hispania because I still haven't heard mention of him/her EVER) So yay, continue, and it's awesome.
sue chapter 3 . 7/16/2011
umm, china counts as an ancient empire too, right? so maybe you can add him(please).
Nutty Nerd chapter 3 . 7/6/2011
Carthage, Carthage, Carthage! Or Gaul, or even Hispania. I'd say Brittania, but that's in AD. Since this story had OC's, I thought it was going to be LAME. But, I read it, and it's very good. Rome is a jerk (but he's the guy we love to hate~ \(.u.)/)
The Animanga Girl chapter 3 . 7/4/2011
If this was in facebook, I would put a "Like" 'cuz I really liked this chapter continue with the good work :D
Reige chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Ooohh... I'm new to this but I know that Grandpa Rome is a hottie, so this great for me! CONTINUE!
Lily-L-Bell chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
There's nothing wrong with her being older, from a Greek cultural perspective, look at the evidence in The Odyssey. Many of the suitors that came for Penelope were in fact probably closer in age to her son than her. And there is also the tale of Oedipus, who unknowingly married his own queenly mother after accidentally murdering his father. She was his mother so of course she was a lot older than him, but in ancient Greece age didn't seem to matter as much where station was involved. As well by the customs of the land, Rome can have as many wives as he wants, so Hera could be one of many.

Looking forward to this to seeing all the ancients.

Will Gaul appear? Or Anglo England? Maybe even Norseman? Then there is of course Persia, and the Semitic Peoples. (I'd say Caananites but that's way more specific than it needs to be.)
narawangsa chapter 2 . 4/5/2011
Wonderful premise, sounds like it will develop into a great story.

Nice name for Ancient Greece, by the way. :3 Hera just screams, y'know, "historically accurate" but also a little ironic at the same time. Honestly, I have no idea why.

I guess we can conclude that Greece and Italy are now distantly related :9 Or something. lol

faved and alerted!