I really love this. I love the Clark and Lois interactions. I have actually just started watching Smallville, slowly catching up and I absolutely love it. Please please update soon. I want more of this.

this is pretty good. the characters are in character, the story flows and the dialogue is realistic (for smallville). Anyway, I like it, can't wait for an update!

I loved it! Every bit from their banter to Clark picking up her slack with the girl scout cookies to Lois teasing him about being scared of needles! Oh, and Jimmy Olsen! Doesn't get any better than that, I hope that we'll get to see Perry White and maybe Cat Grant at some point? That'd be great!

Dear blackberrymint,

This is very funny. I see you are new to Smallville, and I would like to formally welcome you to the fandom. I feel the need to warn you that some people can get very vicious; there are many competitive fans trying to prove the ship they like is better. However, it is a big happy family in the end, so welcome. I myself started watching in season three. You must be having so much fun catching up. You don't have to wait on all the new episodes to come out, because they are all new to you. Anyway, this is very funny, and slightly reminiscent of the blood-drive in season one. Of course, we know Lois will not let Clark off the hook as easily as Lana did. So, is this supposed to be in season eight, because you said it was when they were both at the Planet, but not together, and Jimmy is alive? I find it curious that you keep calling him Boy scout, considering it is his Justice League code name. Did you do it for that reason, or some other. The Clarkie nickname callback is interesting. Everybody loves Lois busting Clark's chops. Well, good luck, and welcome again. Thank you for your story, and I look forward to more of it, and more stories from you in the future. Have a nice day.

~RedTailedHawkens

Heya bbm! Welcome to fandom! :) Be glad that you've been spared from years of Lana torture and the writers' own special brand of hell that is the Lois and Clark 'will they won't they'. :P They're now in love, happily engaged and Clark isn't a broody mcgrump anymore.

I loved your story! Ah, brought me back to the good ole' days of S8 (before the writers ruined it) when Lois and Clark would banter back and forth across their desks at the Planet, skirts riding up and tight clothes included. Clark still is terrified of her poor thing. :P

A very very good first effort! Again, welcome. Thank you so much for sharing! ) Looking forward to reading more of your work soon!