nice but its kinda a bit messed up

OMG I LOVE IT... ITS SO beutiful!
i like the song lyrics too ;)

Awesome story

the fawqing hawl is this shnichle?

I love it so sweet

This story's really g

nice story :3

and omg... flesh eating penquins... -shudder-

Aw! I loved that! SO CUTE!

*evil Gunther* love the idea! HA!

That was awesome! Please contine it!

I really loved this story. It was one of the first Finnceline fics I'd ever read and it remains one of my favorites.

I really wished you'd write more for Adventure Time, but that decision lays entirely in your hands.

i really liked this story, i'll look for more by u if there is none plz write more

Great story i love finn x marcelene story's and for everyone else that reviewed and said vampires don't have blood your wrong vamps do have blood

okay i just want to say- this is SO AWESOME! i thought i was the only finnXmarciline fan, but then again i don't read adventure time fanfics that much and the ones i do find are finnXPB, which is cute. btw she's a bitch for saying that about marciline. oh yeah, and this was cute and i'm glad finn saved marciline and EW ice king with marciline alone XP oh and the reviews below that have a problem with jake dating lsp can seriously just shut it because it's a fanfic and so yeah he dates whoever u want him too

internet rule #8739: Lady Rainicorn is Jake's girlfriend, NO EXCEPTIONS.

Your story was well written but I spotted several mistakes. I'll point them out for you:

1. Gramatical errors (EVERYWHERE!)

2. Why would Jake go out with LSP when he is dating Lady Rainicorn in the show?

3. "Well, not everything!" Jake said cheerfully. I thought Jake was back at the tree house sleeping? I assume you meant Finn.

4. There was a pool of blood. Are you indicating that the blood belonged to Marceline, because vampires don't have blood last time I checked.

Well it was good until it u ruined it with FinnxMarceline in the show its FinnxPB so totally unrealistic. Srry for such the tough review but I'm only trying to help.