Oh, this better not be a yaoi story, or I'll hunt you down!

(not gonna hunt)

You spelled Heero wrong. Anyway, Awesome story!) XD

this was realy good, so i thank you for righting it.

Hello, there! I've just finished reading your fifteen-chapter fanfic, and I must say that I did enjoy it. I was cringin for some of the Quatre-torture scenes, but it reminded me of my favorite-ever Fushigi Yuugi fanfic, 'Breaking Point' by Kimura, so I wasn't disturbed too horribly or anything. ;

Occasional little things bugged me. Like everyone calling each other by their last names. As far as I know, only Wufei ever called everybody by their surname instead of their given name. ; Also, your Heero (whose name spelling I didn't mind at all, by the way) seemed a little too emotional and animated... *shrug* Might just be my interpretation differing from yours, there, as he's a hard character to figure out.

There was an awful lot of use of the word 'grinned'. ; But I got used to it. Perhaps use some other adjectives next time, though, like 'smiled', 'smirked', or even a description of a smile, such as 'the corners of his mouth cved upward ever so slightly'. *shrug* I think you get the idea! ;

Congratulations on finishing such a long chapter-fic. Only one of mine has gone on longer than this chapter-number-wise, and that's an Escaflowne fic of mine called 'When You've Been Hurt, Too'-it's 18 chapters long, and I'm putting the finishing touches on the 19th.

The sequel sounds interesting...hehe, you've honed the art of cliffhanger-writing well, good job with that. I frankly find it silly to threaten bodily harm to an author if they write cliffhangers. Not only does it freak the poor author out (*cough*I'vebeeninthatboat*cough*) but it's non-productive and cliffhangers really do their jobs well, anyway!

Anywayz, great job, and thanks for sharing this fic with us all.

-Threshie )

Well, that was one of the saddest and most kawaii fics I've ever read! For a minute I really thought you were gonna let Q-chan die! (Seriously then this would've been the last fic you'd ever write! *sharps knive and grins wickedly* Nah, just kidding, keep writing! *looks forward to reading sequel*

I LIVE! (Stupid Tommi Gurrl! It hasn't even been 24 hours yet!)

Your poetry is REALLY good! You should post some up~!

I'm gonna go read your sequels now. Ja~!

*falls over from exhaustion*

Just read... pant pant... the whole story... pant pant... in ... pant pant... whole... day... DROPS DEAD.*

*sits up again* That was brilliant! I really love your cliffhanger so don;t be so hard on yourself! *huggles* This was a great story! I have to go read the next two sequels now... when I'm reincarnated (it takes about 24 hours...) bai~!

*DROPS DEAD*

Wow!

This is such a well written story!

I gotta go read more!

Great story! I really liked it! Keep up the excellent work!

This is so cool! I just love this story. I love Quatre! Congratulations,this is a great fic. I'll be looking foward for the sequel! Good Job! _x

Great story, I love it!

Tabi Chan

*laughs hysterically* Suki is just too CUTE! I thoroughly enjoyed the "Daddy" thing, too. XD I can't believe there aren't more of these cute stories... I can't wait too read the sequel! So... *submits review and clicks on author's name*

This fic is so cool!

Congratulations!

You are great!

Still Cool!

OK,for all the time I have been on (taht mean 3years) for all the fic I have read: at least over 500 ( ok maybe not that much on , but with every web site, I have found and with the one here, I must at least have read over 500 fic)...On all those fic, only a few had been able to touch me, and to get to my heart, 2 about Sailor Moon and 3(so far) about Gundam Wing, the 3 of them about Quatre...Yes i have been reading many good fic about Gundam Wing( specialy the one from ~Reiji Neko Mitsukai~) but like i said only a few had really touch me, one of them is: ~Duo's grief for Quatre (Complete!) from Baerwolf ~ ( a fic about Quatre...really sad and angst, and REALLY REALLY GOOD,the second one, is Desert Rose write by you, and the 3th on is this one, OK maybe this one did get to me like the other 2, but still, it got to me more that the rest of the fic I had read in my life...I will have had that story to my fav, but my fav. list is full...BUt since you are in my fav. author, I can keep a eye on your fic! keep up the good work! I love your story so far!( I mean the 2 i have read..._~ ). Love this story! and Merry Christmas! and Happy New Years! Ja Ne ~Mistal:Dark-Angel~

happiness all around! I reviewed the 'End Notes" yep, still five days