| Reviews for Red and Raven |
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Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2018 why do u have to let them die?...i am fucking shaking i-i i have no words anymore sirius i -i why hestia WHY PETER FUCK U PETER ! |
HPisawesome chapter 1 . 8/23/2018 U are amazing |
Khushi chapter 3 . 8/29/2017 You are an amazing writer. and I bet u will not see this as you wrote this in 2011 and now it is 2017 but this was AMAZING and all three of the books you wrote felt so REAL! It made me CRY, SQUEAK, FEEL EMBARRASSED AND SAY AWWWW! This is truly amazing! I wish you could write more about Harry Potter but as this time not in his past but present and future uk just after the HOGWARTS Battle. It would be truely amazing and inspirational! |
Presgamer1 chapter 1 . 7/28/2017 This is my first review ever and I can't think of a better author to give it to. YOU HAVE MADE ME CRY TEARS OF SADNESS JOY AND ANGER CUZ YOUR WRITING IS SO DAM GOOD KEEP IT UP |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/12/2017 I just finished this HOLE series, and I'm feeling so sad. This was definitely one of the GREATEST of not the best story's I have ever read on the Marauders era. I was happy that there were no super Racy parts in it, so I wouldn't feel guilty. I was over joyed when I found out there was a second AND a third book to the series's. I finally think that I can move on from the Harry Potter books, and I have been reading them or books based off them for 2 years. I think I will start a new book, and learn to love something else. Thank you so much for spending your time to write this wonderful story, and I hope you consider writing and publishing your own book if you haven't done so already. THANK YOU SO MUCH |
Belle chapter 2 . 2/3/2017 I bet the baby must be Soo cute |
Bella chapter 1 . 2/3/2017 Best story ever |
LilyJones chapter 3 . 10/6/2016 Omg, that made me cry! It was the best ever! |
Excaliber00 chapter 3 . 9/26/2016 You're a great writer! I just finished the series and I'm currently sobbing my eyes out, but it was brilliant. |
Guest chapter 3 . 6/25/2016 u dare? |
always smirking chapter 3 . 4/20/2016 every time! Bloody hurts, |
Karbear10 chapter 4 . 4/19/2016 Okay, so I read all of these stories (Flower and Prongs, Green and Hazel, and now Red and Raven), and I would honestly have to say that it is one of my favorites. To be completely honest, I don't think I've ever read a fanfic taking place after the marauders graduated but before Lily and James died, so this was really enjoyable to read. I loved it a lot. All three of them, I laughed in places, I cried in others, and the whole time I felt like I was right there. Only the best writers can do that. Keep up the good work. |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/26/2016 omg... i cried... beautiful fanfiction... |
accio-luv chapter 3 . 10/14/2015 Oh god!...u make me cry everytime..EVERTIME!...i love u...Like srsly... M reading this for like tje 5th time...Its still amazing. I have also read GOING HOME n SOON Could u plzzzzzzzzzz write a Sirius/Hestia during OotP ? Plzzzzzzz...I beg u! r u indian? m too... Ur loyal reader, Manasi/Silver |
latenightreader chapter 1 . 8/21/2015 Great story. Read through all three. Nitpicks: 1)Nymthadora was a shuffleboard and just a few years older than Harry. She is Sirius's second cousin not first. 2)Andromedia was his cousin as well as Naricssa and Bellatrix. All slytherin. Not aunt. 3) Lily no way would of known Arther and Molly from school. Plus when you mentioned in here they just had Bill. They would of infant had all there boys by the time Harry was born. 4) you were off about the technology. Cell phones in 1979? God no. Also with the E.T. 5) confusion between what British people say and American. Candy Sweets. Potatoes chips crisps (not potatoes crisps, close) 6) Alice and Frank were tortured AFTER Lily and James were murdered. Not before. 7) JKR said their parents died of natural causes. Not murdered. (Real not pick. Just because all of them gone in one blow?) 8) James and Lily had only lived at godrics Harlow for a week before sold out to voldemort. And more. Other than these, great well written story which I have enjoyed reading. |