NO!
WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME!?

OK, I get it now. So Yao is immortal, and that's why Arthur wants him. I was confused at first about something else as well, what is the physical age of Yao's body. I couldn't tell if he was kid sized, teenage sized, or young adult sized. "Petite" doesn't really help because there are short teens and adults. I don't mind shota, but I was just wondering.

Aww, the ending was so cute!

I seem to like Arthur a lot less as I read more of your story.

Still hard to read about him cry. . . Good chapter by the way.

I rarely read stories that have China cry. . . It's kind of hard reading about him crying.

This is good for a mostly Russia and China story.

Awww, this was sweet, Kukuku3 Finally a happy ending!

YES! THE BASTERD IS DEAD! (by basterd, i mean Aurther)

WHERE THE HELL IS IVAN!? SAVE YAO, DAMNIT!

Love it. Very well done :)

I...love this! it's funny and well writen. Long chapter long review, so sit back and enjoy the long comign your way. Favorite lines:

"My tea is the best around here, everybody else just serves plain rubbish," (He repeats that to himself every night XD) "Alfred grabbed one of Ivan's hands and placed it on the Asian's chest" (Notice how the American is so forward?)

"He talks?" (Nothing to say here, it was just funny) "Okay, that's enough now. Come on Yao, let's get you ready for bed. I'll brush your hair for you if you want," (Someone's jealous Can you blame him? Ivan has a face that makes you go 'awwww' and piss yourself at the same time. Who else can say they can do that?)

"Ivan felt his cheeks redden and had to resist the urge to pinch Yao's cheeks." (now you know my thoughts went naughty at this part XD) "Yiwan?" (...Fan. Girl. SCREEEEAAMMM! That was too cute!) "Now you get your reward!" (Hehe...naughty thoughts again) Oh speaking of naughty: Francis! Couldn't leave him out, could you?

"I said I finally asked Arthur out and he agreed" (USUK? Whoot! Though did you see the motivational poster that said: USUK and FRUK, Hetalia's version of Team Edward and Jacob? I have it as my screen saver) Oh, and love the waterpipe and kolkolkol bit. Wouldn't be Ivan without it, da? XD

"Yao's eyes widened at the size and his mouth opened slightly." (My thought? you guessed it! Naughty naughty naughty) "Yao is not an object. Yao belongs with me now." (Slighty contradictory seeing at though he's not an object yet he belongs with someone. Just found it funny.)

I was wondering what Francis meant when he said he knew what Arthur had, but you answered it! Hmmmmmm *strokes chin* an Immortal? I...love it! and the thing about granting his dream or what ever? Does he really believe that? *thinks about it* Oh yeah, he does. What else? Oh yeah...Ivan! (ToT) No it can't be true. Tell me Alfred faked it! Tell me! Or I can just keep reading. *pauses* Now I would love to read more, but...yeah, I'm tired. Kudos to you for writing such an interesting story that I'm drained.

I've just spend the last two hours reading this, and I have to say, I loved it and I'm so glad that it wasn't just a one-shot. I great read, though I do feel bad for Arthur B( However, I'm glad it all ended well for Ivan and Yao. I especially like your writing style. It's a perfect balance of action, dialog and description that kept me interested the whole time :D

Thank you for posting this.

This is such a beautiful story. I started reading it quite some time ago, but it got lost among the many things that I had bookmarked, and I was overjoyed when I rediscovered it and read all the way to the end. It's such a clever and unique story, and it's so very well written. I love it!

excellent story! i can't wait to read your next ones! D