| Reviews for Once |
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   Devin Trinidad chapter 1 . 8/13/2012 I feel so sorry for Lavinia because no one believes her. Tell me, where's her husband during all that. You would think that he would support her or something. Anyways, the way you described Lavinia and the way she tells the story was so spot on! Imagery, the descriptive words all perfect! |
| Lalaofthealpacas chapter 1 . 7/9/2012 This is absolutely wonderful! I love your descriptions, and especially the emotion in every word. You are a beautiful writer. It's a branch out from the typical romance fics, so thank you for that as well! I could see Lavinia being a weirdo queen, but still so charming. And I love the Jane references. Basically, the whole thing is awesome! Please write more JatD, and soon! :) |
| MapleTreeway chapter 1 . 10/1/2011 Oh wow was Lavinia crying when Jane flew away? Oh dear... Lively story though! |
| Shay-na-na chapter 1 . 8/17/2011 This as so cute! What a unique idea. And excellently written. :D Loved it. |
| YAY BRAINS DDD chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 That was very sad, and touching. Beautifully written, and a very good one shot that had me in pieces by the end of it. |
| D chapter 1 . 4/3/2011 so cute, touching. It made me so happy! |
| SummerMistedDragon chapter 1 . 4/2/2011 lol I write stories like that too! before you have an account and then post it when you remember what file its under! I love it! Poor avinia |
| Boom-De-Ada-Boom-De-Ada chapter 1 . 4/1/2011 I love the fact that you didn't use quotation marks. It adds an air of elegance to your writing. But then, your writing usually has that elegance that I can never quite capture. Beautifully written. |
| CreCre chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 That was truly incredible... |
| ParanoidPiratePuppy chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 Naaaaw how sweet :D i dies of cuteness :D, i am glad you posted it :) |
| BurningCrashingRaining chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 Twin, I love you. Really I do. But you NEED to branch out. And not just "Up." Try HP, LOTR, anything. |
| Passing of Time chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 Good job! It was so... Mystical. It was awesome! |
| cb chapter 1 . 3/31/2011 I have no account but have been reading for a while w/o commenting but. WOW. I loved this. I think the no quotes thing gives it the sense of a storyteller speaking to a listener, and it's very effective. Fantastic! |
| TheManyFacesofJester chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 Branch out? Come on, you have only written a few stories for Jane and the Dragon and you are quickly becoming a very popular writter! Besides, I really like your stories on JatD... Right! Review! Excellent! I lOVE that you did not use quotations. They are very bothersome, and unexceptionly clutterish! In my opinion. Again, kind of reminds me a style of writting I could picture Jane Austen writting in. Classy, and elegant! |
| Randomnessgirl1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2011 I rememeber you telling me about this! I'm not a total idiot! Very good. Poor Lavina, no one believes her... |
