'Don't chew with your mouth full'
What?

This is really, really funny! :D

mulan mam!

Like this concept! I think Marie Antoinette's favorite colours were red and blue. Flea in French is puce.

Wow, this story is really good! I would love to hear more if you ever want to continue!

nice story! i hope u continue it!

I just wanted you to know that this story is awesome :D It's hilarious, everyone is in character, and the dialogue sounds like it could actually happen in a real Hetalia episode. Oh yeah and I'm especially glad that it seems you're putting in some of my favorite pairings! Yay!

I hope you update soon, but take your time :D

I'm a little confused. Uh, who is America handcuffed to? Sorry. I be stupid and can't figure it out. lol

I don't think you're writing took them out of character at all. I thought this first chapter was great. Can't wait to read more. HeeHeeHee!

Hehe. Two words.

Love it.

That is all I can say to describe such a piece

*fades into the shadows*

ASDFGHJKL. Need more! It's the perfect balance of hilarity and plot, so it's funny and odd, but not total plotless crack! *swoons* pairings everywhere

noooo! damn it! i just read your story, and there isn't more of it (yet)! Q_Q

i'll definitely fav it to know when there's a new chapter, america's idea is on prussia's level :D

Spamano & englandxFrance ftw 3

this was just a fantastic idea! bravo handcuffing france and england? priceless! and i love the spamano (my otp)3

Isn't who spit in her bean curd from Mulan? I think her grandma was talking about some annoying person.

I agree with sticking with two main pairs. Especially since it's FrUK and Spamano. Limiting your focus allows for more development within that focus, so it's really the best way to go about writing a story no matter what your skill level is.

I liked this chapter a lot by the way... I bet England does have a creepy eyebrow-petting habit... HELLO HEAD-CANON PLEASE ADD THIS TO YOUR LAND OF INFINITE POSSIBILITY RIGHT NEXT TO FINLAND'S FANBOY-GASMS OVER HARD ROCK MUSICIANS.

*cough* Anyway I also like that America is handcuffed to Korea. Those two characters just kind of... work, as friends. JUST as friends mind you BUT, oh if you added a blurb of them watching a scary movie together, it could be short, but it could be hilarious. Just as a thought.

I look forward to more!