I was reading this yelling at my laptop that Maddie better not die,That was really cute story

I love you for not letting her die and for writing this story!

Oh my god, this story is just...perfect...:')

I cried x')

Really well done on writing this story, you did a great job and I enjoyed reading every part of it 333

SO cute~ 3 I thought she was gonna die. (I just read one where Canada did die) Nice to see she's alive and well.

Yay! Madeline stayed alive! I'm so happy~

When I first started reading this and I discovered it was based on the 'Louise' Music video, I was worried that she would die in the end- Just like Louise, but I read it because there was still a chance that she would survive and I was right and now I can't stop smiling at the end. Especially the fact that Madeline started seeing the paranormal world. I'm really happy it ended up like this- Good work!

Yay~ Maddie's alive! Piyo, Piyo~

Im so glad she's alive Piyo~. I was really worried that she'd die with regrets or something! And that would NOT be awesome, Piyo~...

Eli and Roddy are getting hitched! But Roddy's not wearing the dress? That just means that he wore it secretly for Eliza when they were alone, Piyo~! XD

I liked the story~ It was really fun to read. The fact that it's a PruCan just makes it super-awesome,Piyo! I hope you'll write more fantastic stories in the future!

(Piyo's a fun word :D)

YES! thank you. Proper name pronunciation een MENTIONED.

I love you. Seriously. Every time people look at Madeline or Madeleine they think "oh, Ma-de-line, but Ludwig Belmans". So, thank you.

Gilbert thinks reviews are awesome? I'm going to have to steal that line. *shifty eyes* Probably something like, 'lilithrising says Gilbert thinks reviews are awesome...' or something.

NDE. WHAT. But at least she was Amelia again. How nice.

Mon dieu. This is such a great story! Some of the best fics are the sad ones in my opinion, and this was fantastic! You kept everyone in character and might I add you did a spot-on job with Gilbert! Also! It's very difficult to write as a person coping with the loss of a sibling or child, and did a great job :) And finally, I love both Fem!FrancexEngland and Fem!CanadaxPrussia!

Your fellow writer,

~Kitty~ :)

Maddie, noooo! D: please tell me it's just that they suck at reading pulses! Please tell me she didn't die, too! You took Amelia away, isn't that enough?.! -is sobbing in a corner-

-Alerts story-

NOOOOOOOO YOU KILLED HER NOOO -cries-

ah man.. i hope it will be better. poor gil. he must be heartbroken. -sniff- i can't wait till the nect chap. the story is beautiful i really love it 3

... No... You gotta be kidding. That just can't be! D8 Tell me she'll wake up, heee? Please tell me!

YOU MADE ME CRY T_T

(Oh and I love the story, even if it's sad, Btw xD)

Nooooes. Maddie can't die. That'd be sad.

NOOO MADDIE! Ah god, this story is so good, please update!

Madeline so easily jumps to conclusions, just like Arthur. Will Gilbert be able to save Madeline?