Well done, hope you still write more about the surprise they got and live beyond. Thank you for writing

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

I am really looking forward to the next chapters, please update

tastefully written

I must say this is a fabulous story!

Another good story from you. I think they would be great parents. They do need to spend some quality time together though. If you know what I mean!

I know you have a lot of WIP and it must be difficult to find time to update them all, but please keep it going :~) x

The part with her thinking about her responsibilities to the crew and children was really well writen and emotional. Another great chapter!

I've been enjoying this story. I have to admit, I'm a bit lost w/ this chapter, but I bet you'll explain w/ in the story. Had to look back in previous chapters to see whether or not she'd been sent on a mission; felt this chapter was a bit abrupt. Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier, but rest assured I've enjoyed reading and I'm looking forward to reading how the story continues to unfold. Keep up the good work!

Hehehe! Loved the last part with B'Elanna. And the babies' names are cute too. Another great chapter!

Yay! What an intense chapter! And definitely a surprise. I thought in the beginning of the story she might be pregnant, but then didn't think so with the losing weight and everything, so definitely didn't see this coming. Great twist and great chapter!

LOL! I could just picture Tom and B'Elanna's faces when they walked into that little scene. And so glad they worked things out. Awesome chapter! :)

Aww, so sad. Very emotional chapter! Especially the part with B'Elanna at the end. Looking forward to the next chapter!

At least they know neither of them was intoxicated now, lol. So hopefully they'll work it out. Another really good chapter!

Very well written! The last part with the 'I love you's' was cute. What were in those muffins though, Lol! Really good start!