Six years and no update. Gave up? Bummer.

don't leave it please

Dijiste que no abandonarías! Por favor vuelve y termina con esto, necesito saber qué continuará! Vamos sube algún capítulo pronto

This is surprisingly good writing keep it up

Please Update!

Hey are you still writing on this story?

Still rereading and still waiting. This is just classic.

I seriously hope you continue this

I like this story a lot, although the newfound relationship between Lil and Kimi is unsettling. I just feel like they wouldn't actually do that you know? Like, not canonically. But hey, this is fanFICTION, after all.
The heat between Tommy and Kimi keeps me on the edge of my seat, and honestly, one of them needs to make a move!
However, one concern I have with the story is the characters' roles. I mean, I know that the story is focused on Tommy and Kimi, but all the characters have large roles in their lives- I guess I'm saying that I hope Phil and Chuckie have bigger parts down the line! And honestly I can't wait for Lil to (hopefully) become part of the group again, so they can face everything together.
Anyway, was that constructive enough criticism? I don't really have any complaints with the story, after all. I like it! Just please keep the characters in character down the line- I know, I've done this- with increasing plot and drama, yes they may change a bit from things like stress and pressure, but they can never change too much. Well, that's just a piece of general advice, though I'm sure you know that. Anyway, great story and I can't wait for the next update!
Angel-of-Energy (my actual ff account name)

Oh, glad to see you're still working on it! I thought you abandoned it...
Update soon hopefully!
:)

Nice start

I hear you as a fellow writer about "transition block" and take your time. I'll still be waiting for an update and will happily read it when it appears! This is a great story, I won't abandon it. Keep up the amazing writing! :)

I love this story so much! Your way of writing is perfect for the characters and you can really feel them as you read! Please continue! I only found this last night and re read it about 7 times!

It's pretty much been a year since you up dated and I'm getting sad...I always do this...I get super into a story and then I find that the person hasn't updated for soooo long...3 great all grown up stories and non of them will get finished. Please be the first. This story is one that I would love to see finished! Please help a reader!

Yeah...if you could just update...that'd be great...