Oh yeah! Marth is comforting Meta Knight! I like both characters! You did an excellant job! Poor Sailor Dee...

How touching! btw, i posted a OC on ur kirby forum his name is Uni Knight.

Wow, this is a really good oneshot! With just a limited amount of space, you managed to write an excellent story, and I think the fact that it was a birthday present makes it that much more unique. Certainly not a present one would be expecting!

Still, though, it's sad how Sailor Dee died...I've always been fond of that character...

I know how Meta Knight feels there...about not really wanting to talk about something, but knowing that you'll feel better if you do. I had one of my friends get me to tell her something that had been bugging me for a while, so I was really able to connect with this story.

All in all, though, you've written an excellent piece!

Poor MK! Well, at least he had Marth to listen to him.

There are two simple phrases that are made to fill life with joy and smiles. One is "love," and the other is "thank you". You may now gag on my sentimentality.

This is a strange way to say "Happy birthday". I mean, it's friendship, yes, and thankfulness, but an innocent (sort of) character is dead among the waves. Certainly not a usual gift for the day of one's birth. Nonetheless, if ANW likes this, then it's the perfect gift to give on this day.

A few phrasing things should be worked out ("the loss of the Halberd has taken its blow on me"), but the typing was rather good. The message came across clear and easily, and you struck a balance between acquaintanceship and yaoi-which would have caused serious debate-that is difficult to express.

Happy birthday, AnonymousNinjaWhale, and may the gift given to you be one to provide cheer through this upcoming solar cycle. Yes, I tried very hard to avoid a stupid rhyme.

Thank you (for your "thank you")! That was to most awesome birthday present!