Its sad i didnt read this when you were still writing this but i just wanted to say that i love this story and that you are a great writer

puedes hacer una secuela me gusto mucho y desearía que hicieras una

que lindo

That was such an epic story.

or i love that story better then the others I have read of itachi and naruto

I Love the way this story is writing, Hope you'll uploads the story soon; I want to know what happen next in the story. So please update the story ASAP.

When will you continue this story?

I want to know what will happen next in the story.

damn no wonder she lost the baby she had it for like 14 months or a year and 2 months if you perfer, yes i was acually doing the math -_-

Wonderful ending!

Write more and LONGER Itachi and Naruko FANFICS AND MATURE!

great story!

Alright, You asked for a review. I'll give you one.

1. You have tremendous potential as a writer.

2. You chose the wronge pairing/subject to write about.

3. Personally, I have nothing against Naruto being a girl, and having sex with Itachi or Sasuke, but the way you suddenly portrayed the sex, rather ... lacking in substance.

Suggestions:

-Write about something that most people will read. Did you know that out of the 10 or so stories that have more than 5k reviews about 7 of them have listed in the details that its a NaruHina.

People like to read the canon. Don't change too many details and you'll be fine.

-Try and get a good buildup going.

I admit I suck as a writer. In fact I'm probably one of the worst writers here. So don't any of my comments like i'm flaming you or anything.

You wrote a good story, but it wasn't to the tase of the masses.

Loved it cant wait to read more. lol

Awww what a great ending to a great story. I love how Sai got his ass beat by Itachi hehehe that will make me hapy just to think of that when I am sad. So you are a great writer keep up the great work. Now I have to get some sleep becase it is 3:08 in the morning so good life I guess and bye. :)

Wow this is a great story and I hope that u r feeling better but does this mean that the baby will die I mean it is probaly getting no nutrision (srry if spelled wrong)by thet way I love how u made Sai a waiter I couldn't help but laugh at the thought of Sai in a suit with slick back hair and a big red bow tie ik u didn't say he had a bow tie i just imagine that he would have one either that or he would be ina suit 2 sizes 2 small cause it is Sai anyway love the story it is great.

the story was really good. it was also funny at the end. plz update soon.

OOH! Sounds interesting! Would love love love to see it updated!