Reviews for Within Ashes and Notes
Nijigei Chronicles chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
Hnn... That's why Dino is an herbivore... *sigh
FiyoriTakeshi chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
I'm seriously crying like a little bitch right now. This fic was just soo good and sad and damn. Mission accomplish.
Fran-anisca Grave chapter 1 . 3/3/2012
I had my tear wetting my cheek while reading this especially when it coming nearer the where Dino confessed himself. It make me stung when Kyouya burn the journal. I'm glad he kept the pendant, picture and t-shirt. Maybe its better that way. Having to read someone death's wish over and over again is very agony. I can understand that feeling. Really, I don't know that you can write angst genre even not quite good enough but really managed to make me cry. I'll recommend you to read Soul Under's story. Its really fit with that genre. Maybe it could inspired you if you wish to write that kind of story later. Anyway, this story is good. I enjoy it even I cry at the end.
Anikah chapter 1 . 11/7/2011
Oh this was so sad.

Loved the ending :)
Yachiru443 chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
i am so choked up from reading this.
EK12 chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Major Fail... Well not completely. For the most part, it was kind of cool, until it became a death make us part type...
dontudaremesswithme chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
so sweet, so sad T_T

but throwing the book away was so typical of hibari, fora moment after he finished reading it i thought he might suicide to go be with dino, but of course he chose them most logical way of dealing with it.. but this was just so bittersweet, i almost cried at the end x)
Sugar Dawn chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Ahh~ that got me very emotional.3 it was well written. ;3
Ephemeral Muse chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Reviewing because you're a greedy-ass bitch.

1) This is cute.

2)KyoyaLelouch at the end. OOC plox.

3)Too many words, yet I couldn't even tell it was hot until the shirt thing in the second paragraph. For a second I thought it was raining lulz.

4)Too mannyy worrddss. Srsly. Learn to write less. It makes my head hurt when I see paragraphs that could be shortened down into sentences. D;

THAT IS ALL.
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
awww this one is sooo depressing! I mean Dino died! And poor Kyouya is having it tough! BUt nonetheless, just love it!
ff wont let me log in chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
i dont know why you said you werent good at righting these kinds of stories. it was beautifully written and i hope you right alot more like it
StoryFromClocktower chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Oh, so SWEEEEEEETTTT!

Really.. Really... Really... AWESOME! WONDERFUL!

I love this!

Keep writing~ :)

best regards,

Sad ending lover
11riku chapter 1 . 3/24/2011
t-this i-is AWESOME yet a bit sad, i cant believe it!wew!that journal was something alright!i hate to admit it but i-i almost cried at the end of that journal..hehe that was nice:3
taemcunt chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I'm giddy. WHICH IS A GOOD SIGN. I LURVE IT TO PIECES. I don't want to restrict you, but lengthy chapters have pros and cons. It was kind of a mouthful to read to myself and I found myself reading the same word over and over again in longer paragraphs. Though your sense of writing is unbelievable Aimee[-shii, if you're uncomfortable.]! It's fluent, unlike many fanfics I see nowadays. Kinda disappointing they are. I'd marry this piece of art. Though it's not legal in Texas, honey. ;) You're great at angst! Even if it's hard to write, I always congratulate the author's that make it great to read. And one more thing: Hibari's a brunette? I thought he had black hair.
18plusForMe chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Omg. You made me cry. I'm seriously spilling tears... I don't like this kind of angst~ So sad... Well, it was a different read, but I enjoyed it. Thanks.
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