Reviews for A Better Liar
Priestess of Silvanus chapter 4 . 3/31/2014
its a good start, the little fluffy chapter was sweet.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/15/2011
More, please!
Alhendra chapter 4 . 3/27/2011
Really enjoying the tension between Fenris and Anders, hope to see more soon!
Telelli chapter 4 . 3/23/2011
This is great. You're doing the Male Hawke/Fenris/Anders triangle so well, I don't know who I like better!
tetsuhiro chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
There are so few M!Hawke/Fenris fics on FF so I really enjoyed this. And with just a tad of some Anders flirtin' just makes it that much better! Nicely written and interesting, this story will always have me as a faithful reader. :)
Catriana chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
Loved this. The Anders/Hawke/Fenris triangle was done well. I thoroughly enjoyed reading these shorts :)
Catriana chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I loved how you wrote their relationship. Ferns definitely comes off as being jealous/possessive, part of his passionate nature he tries so hard to hide. I love M!Hawke/Fenris, it just works for me.

Now to go and read the other chapters :)
Gumdrop chapter 4 . 3/20/2011
This is SO brilliant. Everyone's so in character, and Fenris trying to read was adorable! Eagerly awaiting the next update :D
MissPumpkinHead chapter 4 . 3/18/2011
I am in love with this story. Seriously. This kind of M!Hawke/Fenris is exactly what I've been looking for, and the bit of Anders sprinkled in there only makes it better! Please say you'll write more! The status of the story says "complete", which surprised me because the end of this chapter makes it sound like it's not over yet! Either way, I hope to see more M!Hawke/Fenris from you. Thank you SO much for writing this.

The part with Hawke teaching Fenris to read was incredibly adorable, by the way. I loved that.
Ar11 chapter 4 . 3/17/2011
Woo!

More chapters!

I love you for adding in the bit about Hawke helping teach Fenris to read. Thought that was unbelievably sweet when I found out about it in-game.

(:
Slashguy chapter 3 . 3/17/2011
I'm in Act III of Dragon Age II as a male mage Hawke in a rivalmance with Fenris. I had to see if there was fanfiction with them, and I found this wonderful story. You captured the personalities of the characters perfectly!
Siibi chapter 3 . 3/17/2011
Teehee this chapter was so damn cute :D again, great work!
Siibi chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
"Hawke is mine, the smile said. Just try and challenge my claim." great chapter!

I have no idea why there are so few DA2 slash stories, I mean really who would want to see Fenris or Anders with Lady Hawke when she is clearly destined to be with Isabela :D keep up the good work :)
Ar11 chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
This was fantastic (as short as it was).

There's a severe lack of M!Hawke slash so far.

So sad.

Luckily, this was well-written enough to make up for it.

(:
LeDeuxGato chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Excellent!

Exactly what I've been looking forward to. :P I've added this story to my favorites and you to my author alert list. Please keep writing!
19 | Page 1 2 Next »