I think this a fantastic book and I have enjoyed it greatly . I love how t he big three finally got to see how their children live and I also love that t he demigod c an at least spend a bit of time with their parents

This made me laugh so much. Very original idea. There were a few typos and errors, but it was very good

I love this already. Mwahaha! Revenge of the wives! The gods really had it coming.

This is original and weird in a good way. Thanks for writing such an amazing story

Love the story Wonders if her a doesn't get eaten by a poor snake or something elsed or brought as a lab rat to be experimented on Loved that the big 3 gotten to spend time with there children

Vial is what a potion goes into
Vile is an insult by calling something or some one a vile evil cockroach like on hp prisoner of Azkaban as an example

True, they are creepers

This is a great and funny idea, but I just hate that you turned Pula into Gabe.

Great! But you described Tartarus very badly, still, I read your story, and thats something, isn't it? I know for certain that I don't complete many stories.

Ahem! So, I guess you haven't read The Greek Gods, you know that it is a must if you want to write a story, because I just remember you saying that they ate breakfast, and if you eat anything of the Underworld, you won't be able to get out. Also, you can only go to the Isle of the Blest if you have taken rebirth 3 times and all the times you have lived very good lives, otherwise, you go to Elysium, or the fields of Asphodel if you were neutral or maybe the Fields of Punishment if you were really bad. Sorry to point out so many mistakes, but I had to.

Tut! Interesting! Really really interesting! Apollo! Not having a prophecy? Duh. I would take it that you didn't know how to write one, which is perfectly normal, as they DO seem to be quite difficult to write.

What was that thing anyway?! That glob? And, uh, Paul? I, um, is he good or bad? Urgh! And, that being dragged into closets, are you serious? Percy was trained at Camp Half Blood, man! I am sure he can do some self defence towards some girls!

Gah, are you serious? Sailor Moon? I don't think that such clothes should be allowed at school, but then Mr. Bastar does seem like the person...

Hm, it looks like Paul is a bit emotionally and mentally unstable...

Oh, I would have liked it better, if the person doing that to Percy had been Gabe instead of Paul, I happened to like Paul, you know?