Reviews for Abrupt
Post U Later chapter 2 . 1/7/2014
See! NOT GOOD! Poor Dean, I Will Never Understand Men & Why They Have To Pretend To Be Fine & NOT Ask For Help.
Post U Later chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Fucking John. Appendicitis Isn't Something To Be Messed With, You Can Die If Your Appendix Bursts & It's Not Taken Care Of.
SayLo chapter 5 . 10/7/2012
Lovely story!
smalld1171 chapter 5 . 3/27/2011
Very nice, I am glad I found this story! You did a great job and I look forward to your next tale! Thanks for a wonderful story and a great ending! :)
pandora jazz chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
I just finished reading your story and wanted to say thanks for sharing it with us.

You did a great job writing Dean and Sam's voices and actions.

I always enjoy an ill Dean story as long as we get to 'see' Sam taking care of his big brother and you did a great job with that.

I enjoyed the flashback explaining why Dean didn't like hospital's. The childhood flashback was also wonderful because I loved the scene where Dean heard Sammy crying and went to get him so the brothers could leave with their father.

Sam's idea for Dean to think it was Bobby that performed the surgery was cute. I did like how Dean would calm after hearing Sam's voice while he recovered from his surgery. You did a wonderful job with the brother moments.

I enjoyed reading your story.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
moira4eku chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
Awhhhh...I just love it! Sam actually took a zoned out Dean to Bobby's and told him that Bobby did the appendectomy! And Dean believed him! So funny! Poor Sammy, he'll need as much rest as Dean with all the stress. Just like Dean to wake up and want his Beer~LOL! Thanks for the great story and look forward to your next one.
Paulathe Cat chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
That was a thoroughly enjoyable read. You did a good job giving the guys authentic motivation, dialogue and behavior. I love that Sam had to care for Dean.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/26/2011
That was a brilliant story !

I really enjoyed reading through it and I'm sure it took slot of time :)

Excellent story !
Leigh Ann Wallace chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
Excellent take on the boys and the situation in school. I can totally see that happening.
smalld1171 chapter 4 . 3/26/2011
Wonderful stuff! LOVE the whole Social Services part and the way Dean reacted when he realized what was really going on. I am of course looking forward to your next update! Thanks for the great story, I am truly enjoying it! :)
Coffeebeforelife85 chapter 1 . 3/25/2011
Oh wow very good
Brightshadow-chi chapter 4 . 3/25/2011
nice story.

loved the ending part ;)
Amy chapter 4 . 3/24/2011
Aw. I got a shoutout! lol. Thanks. That was neat.

Poor Dean. He's in bad shape. And Sam is a wreck too. The flashbacks are sure telling. Being banged up comes often for the boys. But Dean's still got his sense of humor, so that has to be a good sign. :)
moira4eku chapter 4 . 3/24/2011
Absolutely loved the flash back to when Dean was bruised badly and the CPS was called in. Good thing John was able to grab his boys and skedaddled! I can easily see Dean's confusion on the questioning not realizing until near the end the CPS was trying to separate Dean from his Dad. Really freaked him out! Sammy waiting along Dean's hospital bed is one of my favorite things. Sigh... Looks like Dean is awake now and will recuperate quickly (or will he have a relapse?). Anyhow...Just like Dean to want a beer! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
moira4eku chapter 3 . 3/23/2011
LOL, Sam might just have to lie to Dean about who operating on him! Poor Dean! He really is suffering so. I just knew his appendix would go bad! I feel so badly for Sammy too, having to watch Dean so sick in the hospital. Is Sam referring to the Rawhead hunt that left Dean dying with heart failure?

Hmmmm...the mention of the Social Worker when Dean was 14 sounds like a good story...

Anyhow, hopefully Dean will be fine in a few days and so doped up that Sam can get him to Bobby's without Dean being the wiser~LOL. Looking forward to reading more!
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